Bimbo-fying Superchick

You are so amazing! Absolutely wonderful! Please don't stop this series, it has a potential to be one of your best!

creative thene + great story + humor = 5 stars

Props on your creativity with new theme and this phenomenal story.
My back is sore laughing so hard with the concluding paragraph.
Shane you don't show your sense of humor more.
Looking forward to the sequel.

creative thene + great story + humor = 5 stars

Props on your creativity with new theme and this phenomenal story.
My back is sore laughing so hard with the concluding paragraph.
Shane you don't show your sense of humor more.
Looking forward to the sequel.

I'll be watching intently for the sequal....

I luv this, teen Bimbo and superhero, the thanks to the user who commisioned the idea seem appropriate; this is brilliant combo of subject matter

yes...let's rape all the superheroines, then stick them in refrigerators...

Or was that not the tone you were going for, here? Oh, yeah...and that non-rapists have smaller dicks. Jenny (the alleged commissioner) certainly has an interesting psychosexual profile. Apparently the "women are always...*always*...victims" narrative of the vocal elements of modern feminism (aside from RAINN and a few other heretical groups) not only appeals to her...but actually gets her rocks off. Damn. Those synapses must be misfiring like...well, like crazy, pardon the pun. An interesting glimpse into the abyss, from an intellectual standpoint. It is always helpful to be reminded of just how far one may fall, in absence of critical thinking, and rational analysis of flawed worldviews/philosophies. For that, if nothing else, I must thank you. If one reads only things one likes, or agrees with, ones mind turns to dust from disuse. 5*
-Anubelore

Interesting story!

I definitely like how you always branch out with your story ideas and never being dull! I don't think this is one of your best works but at the same time I love the risk-taking with it. I love mind control/superhero themed stories a lot and wish you the best of luck with this genre!

Something I think could be improved in is just some more character conflict. I'd like to see superchick helplessly turned by the villain while remember all the bad things they have done. It's hot seeing a superheroine being corrupted by serving their worst enemy. I'd find it hot where she would slightly hate herself for getting her hair done, manicure, and pedicure while the rest of the city burns around her. Just wanted to please her captors. Also it wouldn't hurt to really emphasize all the costume/boot play that can happen. A slow sensual boot removal and toe licking is hard to beat. :)

Overall, I felt this was a nice lighter tone sex story. Keep doing what you do!

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Great story. I want more.

Thanks to your "editors"??

Really??

You have a whole paragraph missing opening quotes

Our heroine wakes up bound and gagged.. Pleads for mercy, and then two paragraphs later her gag is removed?

"The "binds" were removed"? Bind is a verb. The noun you are looking for is "bonds"

And that is just three that come to mind

What you send to your "editors" must be REALLY atrocious.


As for the story itself? I would have guess you as the author about a page a and half into it. Nothing special at all, unless one is one of your followers.

You have done some good stuff in the past, but this falls FAR FAR short


(What ever happened to the "Best Present Ever"? You kinda left us hanging, didn't you??)

Author's Note

HI Johnny,
thanks for the honest feedback; I agree not my best story. It was a fan request that sat finished for over a year.

I didn't even give it one more read before release like I usually do.

It's definitely a fetish story, but I thought different from my usual material.

As for best present ever: still trying to come up with a plot.

More please

When the next chapter coming out this is great

Great Story

This is very good, very exciting. Keep up the good work, can't wait for the next part. thanks.

Definitely More Please

The premises for this story is great and has so much potential for this story as well as extended stores. I'm anxiously awaiting the next installment. Till then ~ Peace

Waiting for more.

Great story as always. Looking forward to more.

Please finish this story

I really enjoyed it and think that we really should see Superchick finally be corrupted by the Producer.
I love your work,
Regards.

Looking forward to more

I like the whole female super hero captured and turned concept. With your talent, there is much more that can be done with this story line. Please continue.

A super heroin turned from straight into a lesbian slut would be another story I would like for you to write.

jeezzz

Am I the only one, or does anybody else want the next phase of superchick being turn into a bimbo slut soon!!!! lol

Can't wait for more!

Great story, please continue the story!!!

really looking foward to more !

I understand you have other stories in the works. However, despite many great stories, the subject of the corruption of super chick is the best! Please finish this story as soon as you can !!!

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i would like to see superchick get closer to being evil , get her powers turned back on , then kill the producer , save josie who is now more a lesbian and she has to tell her brother his wife is now her wife , and she decides that all women should be bisexual or she will kill them

hopefully not a full year!

what I was getting at was, hopefully we don't have to wait a full year before you finish this story!? it would be a wonderful Christmas gift or belated Christmas gift , if you can be done with this story before the new year......... Here's hoping that happens :)

please continue

I loved the story and check this site often just to see if another chapter has been added. I hope to see the next chapter soon and that you are in good health.

What drew me first is the title because I enjoy these kind of stories. What keeps me coming back is how you expertly apply a slow tease in the induction, drawing it out like a Chinese water torture that slowly erodes super chick.

great story

Please write more I love this storyline

More!

Any eta on the second part of this great story????

so, any word on when you are going to finish or continue this very interesting and very hot story!!!!!!!!!

Amazong

Loved this story, upset that number 2s not out yet though. The blue balls are real lol

More please

Can we please get the rest of this story? It's the exact kind of thing I love reading about and I'm dying to know what happens to her after this!