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by Anonymous07/01/14

Good writing-a little too fast

keep writing! Your style is refreshing. Most stories in this genre lack personality-the narrator of the story has a breezy way with words.
If you write another story on this theme, slow it down some-have the narrator's frustration build. Give the wimp more chances to fail. And make the seducer a bit more interesting. I really liked your starting line "when you start going out..." I think having a narrator who did that throughout a story (letting you feel you were in on a conversation with her) would make a great read.

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by Anonymous07/01/14

When are you going to write something erotic?

I don't think you can.

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by Anonymous01/24/15

please don't write any more. quit it

You are a wimp wannabe

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