All Comments on 'An Open-Minded Family Ch. 02'
by schnitzs
- 8 Comments
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoOhhhhh, please send more soon! I can't wait to see what he writes to his mom.
Anonymousabout 13 years agoloved the story cant waite for more like see what kind of note he leaves mom
Chrissralmost 12 years agoI like that you are not rushing it. Take the time to build the story line, makes it much more enjoyable. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Anonymousover 11 years agoMy Mother talked to me about sex since I was a child since I was always being caught with my hands on a little girl. She was a religious fanatic so it was always from a religious viewpoint. She never came on to me or anything but she talked to me about sex a lot, I think she got off on it. After I was about 12 she did not talk to me about it much but I was always eager for information. A boy like this one is WAY too shy. Let's show a little faster progress. At this rate it will be Book 20 before he lays a hand on her, LOL.
Anonymousover 8 years agoget some one to proof read your writing. You write a good story but your grammar needs some work.
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