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A Tall Tale Pt. 01

byJackKardic©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/03/14

I always ignore second-person view stories

Please learn to write a first-person narrative or a third-person view story.
The second-person view is THE most annoying story form. I am not the person in your story.

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by JackKardic07/03/14

Thanks for assuming I'm a complete idiot and didn't learn the difference between POVs in third grade, Anon. This was written by very specific request and I was encouraged to post it by a friend. My PC is broken and I'm not about to reformat 2500 words manually on my phone. Have a nice day, and please don't let the nature of a request piece color your enjoyment of future posts of mine, to be written in either first or third person, with shorter, more easily digestible strings of adjectives. My tendency to use nested parentheticals will remain to one degree or another, however, because that's how I both think and speak.

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by ariesgirl07/03/14

There is going to be another day of torture to her? The giant is going to screw her to death.

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by Anonymous07/18/14

MORE!

Loved this story. can't wait for more!

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by Anonymous11/02/14

ohmy...

This is hot!!! More, please!!!!!

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by Anonymous04/21/15

Yes!

More please! This is great!

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