Adoration Sent

Very nice, just a lovely poem.

I really enjoyed this

Romantic and sexy and sweet. Nicely written

gran prick du mal...

you have one thing you can touch (keyboard) , one thing you can barely hear (voiceless whispers),
somewhat of a depersonalization (body), and a whole shitload of fluff - Passion et al and you manged to fool two of the top gamesters
you deserve a 5
as long as you know this is dangerous ground...Oozing as in lust. Which is just wrong in at least two different ways.

oozing lust

Makes me cringe but works in context, has to be a 5 for just that. Interesting write that works well with today's internet available society

Intriguing

There are curious contradictions to it. There is passion and detachment. The references to technology reinforce how connections are made through online access and yet also make you wonder how real those connections are. I like that it makes you think as well as feel.

"Edited, amended, honed to perfection" . . . Agreed! Love it!