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by Anonymous07/03/14

Writing in first person

Difficult to read, hard to keep track of what is going on. Writing from a first person perspective is a poor choice of styles.

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by Anonymous07/04/14

Difficult to Read? - that darn advert up top!!

I gave up. The jerkin' and jumpin' from the advert made reading impossible.

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