In a Room Full of People

good story!

a sequel would be nice, with DP, 3P and ass-to-mouth.

I was waiting for the roommate's appearance.

From the initial setup, I half-suspected she'd been set up by her roomie. Either she'd done it before, or was actually related in some way to the Wilson's. It would have been a thrill to discover that Abbey had deliberately set her up.

If you should continue this story, maybe Abbey and Catherine could actually fool around, putting on a performance together the next time Catherine is hired for an event.

Excellent!

I like the setup and the story. I nice good easy to read story with plenty of adventure.

Parties are always nice when everyone is ready to have fun.

great story

Follow-up stories would be nice to see how Abbey & Catherine deal with catherine*s first party. Some light bondage could also be interesting at the party. It would also be interesting to see how the roommates' relationship changes.

Liked it a lot!

A story that needs more chapters...especially with the friend. HOT!!!

One of my favorite stories!

I've always loved this type of scenario with a nude person in a clothed environment. I would like to have more chapters with other various kinks. Perhaps a garden party on the lawn would make a nice backdrop for water sports. Great story!

Great story.

Luved the story .. Would have liked to hear how mr and mrs Wilson had her.. Like to read new story with her and her roomie... U write well

AWESOME

My cock was hard for the last 2 pages....How soon before her friend joins?

seqel, please

Now that you've put this in motion and did a very nice job, we need to see how kinky Abbey can be. The dildo owning college girl that sucks cock is likely to do just about anything for a price. I think her teacher or dean taking her ass would be perfect. And, I suspect that some guests would pay a great deal for a lesbian scene for the two.

More Catherine!

Very nice story. Nude waitressing or not is a fantasy for me.

You must continue with this storyline ......

This is a very erotic concept, one I really enjoyed. Chapter 2 should include both girls at the next party, but please describe all of the the encounters between the girls and the guests and each other, here you omitted the majority of the episodes between Catherine and the other guests which was quite disapointing. Another comment already made suggested an outside garden party, which would be good for chapter 3 and for chapter 4 you could possibly set in a masked ball with both boys and girls from the uni, interacting with both the guests and each other. You could also have another event on a ship, at an old fashioned Christmas Fayre, Guy Fawkes party, Halloween, plus an outdoor music concert or a beach party/BBC. If you vary the ages of the guests, older, middle age and younger (at the beach party for example) that would add a different tone to each chapter.
But please, don't leave the story where it is, there are endless possibilities for further adventures for Catherine and Abbey with this nude modelling story line; whichever way you choose to move it forward. Just don't leave it too long before you publish the next installment, as the suspense waiting for chapter 2 is killing me already!
Thanks for a great story !

Thank you

One of the best at the party. One of the best in my mind. The build up in the story brought a hardness that needed relieving and shot over my face just like the girl in the story-or was it only a story? I hope Catherine cums again soon with her friend Abbey.

This can't

End here!!!!!!

Eyes wide shut.

A movie as good as your story ! Another chapter is on order here.
Catherine and Abbey are the stars. Certainly Abbey will need some convincing. Do you have a chapter two in you? *~*

Will there be a chapter 2 ?

It's been nearly 11 months since this story appeared, you left it with the expectation that there would be more in due course.
Can you just let us know if there will be more, or is this just a self contained short story as it stands ?

Thanks.

Thanks

Thanks for the nice comments. No sequel unfortunately. But there will be more like it.

best wishes,

heyall

Loved this story

And you are a very talented writer.

Bravo!

That was one he'll of a enticing build up to an incredible story line that has the reader craving more! Please reconsider a sequel... their is so much potential for another rollercoaster ride with the two friends modeling and becoming much closer.

BLOODY FANTASTIC

Congratulations. That was the best story I have read for as long as I can remember. Thank you.

Damned good

You caught the pre-match nerves very well, IMO.
Short sharp and to the point, it was a good tale, well-told.
HP

Please reconsider - and write another chapter ?

This is by far the best short story I've read on this site. It is just so hot and erotic and so very sexy.
Please reconsider your decision not to write another chapter ? Practically every comment you've received is requesting it.
I can sort of imagine a sequel, but I'm no writer and this is your idea and your story.
So please, write one more chapter, with both girls at the next party!

PLEASE ?

Need more

Can you say jealous...would love to be Catherine...please write about the next party...with Catherine and Abbey.

This party would be right up my alley!

Great story. I love being exposed so this is just a perfect fantasy for me.

AV

A good read

Very enjoyable with an interestingly proposed situation, though a few bumps along the way.

For instance when the first woman says, "Would you let me have a taste of what's between your legs?"
It seems slightly inane when Catherine "had no idea what to expect."

It also seems a little tiresome that she is asked to turn around and bend over when anybody, male or female, want to do something to her.

Also, even if you don't put misspellings to indicate accent, You could at least change the voice of certain characters. English butlers don't tend to use colloquialisms, and rich people speak affluently (less contractions). That's small potatoes to the others but I just thought I'd mention it.

Keep up the good work!

Very Good

You could make this a very nice series

WOW AGAIN GREAT

Another absolutely fantasic story. I don't know how I am typing this, my hands are still shaking. Thank You.

Loved everything about this story as a whole and I also loved Abbey and Catherine's friendship and I hope this isn't the last we hear of them.