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part 2 of the epic begans

Melissa's sweet little slit is open to both her bros

This is a great story and, as another reader comments, surely the beginning of a great series. Personally I like all kinds of family fucking. The father who stuffs his fat veiny daddy-dick up his little princess's adorable little coochie. The boy who shoves his big hard cock up the same twat he came out of. But a brother fucking his cute sister is something special. The kids grew up together, his sister's cute cunt is the first cunt the boy ever sees. Her brother's meaty cock hanging down over his balls is the first male package the girl ever lays her eyes on. It's usually a brother who busts his sister's cherry, his big fat cock is the first cock up her tight little twat, his creamy semen the first semen to splatter her insides. So I love this story where Melissa is getting a hot incestuous fuck from her baby brother Andy when big brother Daniel catches them and instantly springs a hard on that's practically busting out of his pants. Naturally he fucks his pretty little sister's pretty little twat till he blows his brotherly balls and floods it with a huge dose of family semen. I hope and trust that Melissa'll be getting banged by both boys from now on, and her cunt'll be permanently brother-sperm-clogged. Did someone mention "baby batter"?

rushed

your story felt rushed it was bam caught bam fucked bam done

Re: Rushed

Thanks for the comment. I've always struggled with pacing :P This is meant as the first part of a story, though. I'm better at writing a series of short stories than one long one.

oh please more chapters

Improved

Much better - I don't buy the 2 hour box part but the reaction to catching the sis and bro is much more believable.

2 hours

Yeah, the line about two hours is supposed to be Daniel exaggerating. But I see that I didn't make that clear.

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it was to short