All Comments on 'Meeting Jenna'

Hope there's more of this story. She f's him...

...And I loved meeting Jenna. Would like to hear more about her. You describe and write about her well, as I've known young ladies just like her, and the excitement you create is palpable to say the least. The D/s is restrained and realistic for the most part, there seemed to be careful monitoring and he backs off knowing that her limitations hadn't been discussed yet. Always important to discuss SSC, which would have led to a safeword, as the lack of one was my one and only criticism. Just a gorgeously done erotic romance with an S&M flavor... very tasty! Thanks for sharing and hope to see more about Jenna soon, 5 stars. Cheers! --- Josie <3

Simply delicious story. You must give us more!

Very well done.Alex. You really know how to write an erotic sex scene. Great story. You made Jenna very real indeed. She reminds me so much of my girlfriend. One of the best stories I have read recently. Please continue to dazzle us.

very good write more chapters about this one please

Your writing is awesome!!! Really hot erotic sex scenes. I look forward to more stories

I could use a steady diet of these two...love your descriptive language and the story! More please!

More, please. I like the storyline and your descriptions and the way the story keeps moving along.

... and I look forward to the next chapter. The story was so good and so unique that the several typos didn't bother me. My one disappointment: I think Jenna would have enjoyed it if David had sucked her cock. Seems rather selfish of him to avoid that critical interaction between 2 lovers.

I just discovered you today and read both your stories (so far). Excellent work. I absolutely loved them. Well written, likeable characters and really hot sex scenes. I also like how you are putting more plot than average in. Tales that are all sex with no plot do nothing for me, but you have a good balance going. I will definitely be keeping an eye on your profile for future works.

This is amazing! You wrote my life dream as a woman myself born trans but I do not see myself as trans. Please write more. Marriage surgries etc. Oh and more details like what color and style panties? Again amazing work.

Very well done! I very much enjoyed your story. The playful beginning of James and Jenna's relationship was well written and charming. I enjoyed the detail in their emotions as the story unfolded, it definitely added to the atmosphere.

I really enjoyed the descriptions of your characters, you managed to provide a good outline of their appearances without getting bogged down in the details, allowing the reader to ultimately see the characters as they choose to fit their own fantasies. I'd definitely enjoy reading a continuation of this story and seeing the progression of James and Jenna together. Thanks for the great story, and I hope you keep writing!

I loved this story - it is so sexy and i got more excited as i read - thank you.

I enjoyed reading this, and look forward to seeing how the relationship develops.

I greatly enjoyed your story. I have a great imagination and no skills in puting my thoughts on paper. It seems you put a little of yourself in the story. Keep writing.

I really enjoyed reading this, it was well written, very sexy and descriptive, i think because you started by easing us into the scene and not like 'oh hey lets fuck' i like stories with just that a story, i really wished i was that lucky guy, but yeah maybe because im in love with shemales but i give you a solid 10 out of 10

I have to say that I have never come across a more innocent beginning to a story in my life, almost like an intimate look into ones own life experience which only made the story that much more enjoyable. Your descriptive powers to bring the reader a perfect idea of who the characters are is better than those hacks on the best sellers list. And the little twist at the end from innocent to something a little less than was just the cherry on top, keep up the amazing writing and you will definitely have me and many others reading them, thank you

I would love to be dominated and fucked just like Jenna.. please anyone ?

I'm jealous of James, it sounds like the best of both worlds. I like how you didn't describe their pubic regions. That let me imagine them how I wanted (both smooth). Very yummy.

What is this shit?!! Jenna is a fucking GUY! Dick between the legs = HE is a GUY. End of! People stop giving 5 stars to this garbage.

Why is this a surprise to you? Did you not see the warning at the begining of the story or the title of the category? This story was very good, but your comments are moronic. If you don't like the subject matter, go back to your comic books.

I thoroughly enjoyed every second of this story, especially the domination bit.

As a fellow Londoner myself, I enjoyed the setting. As a football fan, I enjoyed the World Cup party framing device - very well done.

It seems (the way you've described her, anyway) that Jenna is almost a carbon-copy of Jenna Coleman from Doctor Who. Except she's got a dick. I don't know if that was a conscious decision, but either way, it's well appreciated.

All in all a very lovely story - it just shouted "love and lust in London!"

Just what our city is all about.

The use of vignettes was excellent. I admired the focus of the story being upon the relationship and exploration of the characters. My transgender female friends really liked your focus of Jenna being a woman and playing a female role being loved by a man. Well done sir

I thought it was a great read and I would love to read more of your works. Just awesome.

When you get so many positive comments from Anonymous, you have a major hit on your hands. The only thing is I didn't want to read about Jenna, I wanted to be her. So hard to find a man with just that right touch of caring and dominance. Once you've been with him, you will find the bar set pretty damn high.

One other comment is I didn't notice anything in the way of spelling, wrong words, or grammar. Certainly nothing that detracted from the story. If you would like an editor, you have a volunteer right here.

I'm a sucker for romance and love. This one was it. Thank you.

Thats a very nice story. It just turned me on completely. And very effective storytelling. Keep writting. All the best n thanks.

Thank you for writing this great story. As a trans woman I have to say it was very sweet and romantic, meeting a guy like James is something I have dreamed about for a long time. The sex scenes were well done and its refreshing to see how you make Jenna just like any other girl not a "shemale" type sex object, not fucking him or having him give her oral.

Trans women have the same desire for love and intimacy as any one even though it can be very difficult for us to find a guy who is willing fulfill those needs. It be can such a frustrating situation to be in but stories like this help so much and give me hope that guys like James really do exist.

i loved the story i wish i can meet a shemale i would treat them like a woman no matter what they have i hope to one day meet some willmariano25@yahoo.com if u want to chat with me

very nice story, loved it from begging to end, perfect balance of romance and sex, please continue

your story is wonderful, i think a movie should be made with your story as a scence in it. its so real and original......xoxo

Thank you to everyone who has left a comment/given feedback! It's very much appreciated.

To those who have asked if I'm going to write more on this... the good news is, I just have! I was lucky enough to have a publisher take an interest this story - so now a properly edited and slightly extended version (with a few extra 'next morning' scenes) is now available for a couple of dollars on Amazon and other ebook stores. Same title, same author name, but more orgasms and a bit more spanking. ;)

...For your story Alex. You write so well, creating such well crafted stories that surround those delicious characters like Jenna. Wishing you all the best my friend, and hope you meet all your future goals as well. Cheers! --- Josie

The romance, playfulness, the hot sex scenes. Damn good job.

you are obviously a very special person. I want to be part of your life. I want to beloved like that. Its damned unfair, why can't I be loved like Jenna

Hey, I'm a t-girl and I have to say that I LOVE this story! I read the version here, then saw you had an extended version on Amazon. Just finished in and it is SO freaking sexy! I love the extra scenes. Jenna is adorable and James is exactly the kind of guy I want to meet. God I want to be fucked and dominated like that!

The story was wonderful, I am hoping that you will continue to create such great stories

another chapter?

a view from the other side of the coin. how unique. nicely done.

I would love to see more from you. You had me hooked from the beginning to the end. Great job,

Hi loved this story , can't wait for the next chapter to this !

Awesome story. Please write a part two! 😊

I liked it so thanks for posting it.

I couldn't figure Who I would rather be Him or Her... I loved the Story

I loved the story, I wanted to read more. I was picturing the story in my head as I was reading and can only fantasize about what was happening.

Wonderful story, and yes, I'm inspired. It was longer than I was looking for, but by the second half I was enthralled to finish it. It's funny - I was looking for specifics on writing transsexual erotica, not for actual stories. Why? I'm looking to improve upon my skill-set within this niche. But, I obviously don't mind reading good stories myself, and this one is a good one. Keep it up and take care.

Excellent story line can't wait for the next chapter

This was an amazing story, well written and perfectly described. Most people fail at writing a dominant man x submissive trans-female story but you definitely succeeded. 10/10

Beautifull sexy hot romantic story love to have a beautiful girl like that

Somewhat bitter sweet,I kinda wish Jenna had been more kinky and wanted to fuck James just as he did her,to me Jenna should have gotten to experience fucking James and unloading a HUGE LOAD in his Ass,so they could share their cum with each other.

Oh and totally James and Jenna belong together and should become girlfriend and boyfriend,and fuck like rabbits from now on.Good story regardless.

5 stars and added to my favorites. Great story. Hope it continues

It might help.

You wrote: "I drew her closer to me and kissed her deeper."

Let's divide the sentence into before and after the 'and'.

In the first half, the word 'closer' is an adjective and is correct. It is an adjective because it enhances the word 'her'. One might think it to be an adverb, modifying the verb 'drew', but it is not. The subject of the sentence fragment, 'I' draws the object of the verb, 'her', 'closer'. 'Closer' modifies 'her', not the action of drawing; she is closer, drew is not. As written, it is physically impossible for 'closer' to modify the verb, drew'. I'm not talking grammar, in thie previous statement, I'm referring to physical, real worldness. Still w- me? I WILL bring this full circle. I promise. (Quite a bit easier, and shorter, to think this, than write it, though. lol)

Now, the second half: "...kissed her deeper." The subject of this sentence fragment is the same 'I', but in this case, 'deeper' is/should be an adverb, modifying the verb 'kissed'. As written, it is incorrect, and should be 'deeply'.

Two very similar sentence fragments, but with different modifiers, and situations.

In the second frag, the same real world analysis can be made as in the first. Closer can not modify, (clarify, expand on, describe), 'her', but it can do so for 'drew', (technically, it should be written to as 'to draw', in this explanation, and would imply the analysis would apply to all verb tenses, but that's 'advanced' in the weeds, details.)

Further, 'deeper/deeply' can modify 'kissed', but not 'her'.

People struggle with grammar, mostly because not enough focus is brought upon it in grade school. I'm old enough to have experienced the grueling torture drilling on grammar can be; but, I'm glad I was put through such torture. It made writing and editing for 30+ years much easier.

What a lot of people are never told is many, if not all, grammatical situations can be sorted out if you apply the 'real world' analysis to what is written. Can something be done in real life, the way it is written. Make your writing match real world possibilities, and likely, the grammar will be correct.

It takes practice, and some work, but if you learn the parts of a sentence, and their relationships to one another, you will have the foundation to begin.

Hope this helps you in your development as a writer. It's my way of saying thanks for sharing your imagination, and for doing the work it takes to post a Lit submission, and providing me with free reading materials.

Good luck in your future endeavors.

10/10 loved it

Great story, just a shame you didn't write more.

But well worth 5 Stars !

Rapier

This is amazing!!! Thank you so much!! There's not enough stories like these with/for trans girls.

Excellent !

Well worth more than 5 Stars.

If you can write more like this, please do !

Rapier

Love the stories but gotta get some asspussy eating worked in. I picture all these cuties and no ones even eating any gurl pussy. Just saying.

Thanks for a very good storey. You described it so well I was almost there, and I loved the characters.

Thanks for a great storey. I could almost feel the chemistry working. I am sorry to say that there are far too few stories of this kind with this subject matter, but this is one of the best I have read.

What a wonderful and caring story. A first experience as a trans person must be very stressful. Your story made it a beautiful experience and hot too.

So happy I ran across your touching story of love and lust. I know from experience that no one with any character & heart "EVER" wishes to deceive another, especially when it comes to being who we know we really are. Jenna was sure of herself in who she was yet was very protective in showing it....until she met James. Well done ALEX, well done...Jynny ( a woman in a mans body)

I know I'm late to the party but you are a masterful author. I imagine you have some experience given your details and their accuracy. It was very balanced in terms of background compared to actual sex. I loved this work

Lovely story of match-making turned into brazen lust with some gentle kink!