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A good start
I was surprised to see a story by you in non con, as usual a great piece of writing and a very interesting start to what i hope will be a new series. I do hope though that you keep the non con aspect strong and we see strength and fight in the victims.
5 stars and a huge thank you for yet another story.
creative start
...and now, if you will keep it going...
I'm with shysub
Good start and hope the non con stays strong too.
I always have to wonder where the strong woman is though that will remove his manhood as it goes into her mouth. Neither here have anything to lose and he could easily bleed to death, so he would dip out too.
Loved the mother and daughter surprise too.
Very interesting
I'm looking forward to more.
is this the dumbest story of all time?
Probably. The mom/ professor thinks she was grabbed or taken by this guy and / or his associates because her drink was spiked.
so WHY was her daughter grabbed? That was not a coincidence. The odds are very high that this was set up by a family member or on behalf of a family member
I find it hard to believe
That an intelligent educated strong woman would give up so easily.
Could get better
U've got a good story lined up! U need to put more detail in! The chapter needs to be longer! U want tell us abit more on the collector n the buyer mistress! How old they r! U haven't mentioned about the professors n her daughters names! With the collector having to kidnapped a professor who is highly educated I would want to c more resistance from her breaking her will power would be good to show her place! The relationship the mother daughter hav got should also be reminded to them that it's over coz they only r known as a bought property! U need to put sum mind games between them two in which they start to hate each other but then on the other hand they hav to pleasure each other according to their collector! Hav new names for them! Tattoos n piercing hair cutting to give them a new same look between them two like for example hav tha same colour hair so they look identical! Hav men n women in to break them totally! U need to show they r very obedience n cooperative! Or hav the collector turn out to be sumone local to the professor who the professor really hated in which he wanted to get some sort of revenge??? Hope u don't take to long on the next chapter!!!
Cool
i LOVE kidnapping stories the most where there is force....Consensual stories are not as good as non consensual....As in beginning of the story there is force and kidnapping but was maybe bad idea to make it a story of incest....that mother and daughter have sex with each other.....And would be better if they were sold to a Master instead...
great start
looking forward to where you take it!
great start
I like this start a lot. The factual telling of the upcoming fate, the understanding of the incestuous implication... and the forced lesbian aspect...
Continue on this ... soft but terrifying !
Hot
Stories related / based in these region are always hot and exciting.
Sam (kinkykingfisher@yahoo.com
:))) What a shit!! :))
Kinapping stories can be okay but.....
I'm not a fan of ones where a wife is stolen from a husband or a family is broken up. Couldn't you have made her divorced or widowed???? Why take her away from her husband. If my wife (and my daughter) were taken from me, it would drive me crazy, I'd never stop looking for her, and when I found her, those responsible would learn the meaning of PAIN and retribution. The way things are with traffic and security cameras everywhere, such abductions are much more difficult.
I like it
This start is great. I can hardly wait for the second and third installments. Love Non-Consent stories, especially when they involve BDSM
Hot Start
Good Start to a hot story
Good servitude premise...
I'll read more, thanks.
Gave me a few things to think about to solidify a few story ideas.
He's making himself really vulnerable ...
I wouldn't expect her to give up so easily. If she bit him really hard, he wouldn't be in shape to whip anyone's cunt; she might even start him bleeding really badly. If he collapsed, maybe she could kneel on his throat, and, when he passed out, try looking for a key to the cuffs.
They might not escape, but at least she would have got some revenge on this monster.
Amazing
You have a real knack for writing! This is really great, please continue!
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