Up to the usual high standard. At the start I was worried that the changing room scene was too repetitive of the plot from earlier episodes, but by the end you'd blown me away. Again.
I just love following Gwen's battle between prude and libertine... it's all so believably written. The plot devices of 'the lady' and 'the slut' are a stroke of genius in allowing you to illustrate Gwen's internal conflicts.
I'm completely hooked on the (forgive the pun) expansion of Gwen. Such a wonderful journey, filled with so many little adventures, and with the promise of so many more...
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Wow!
That was great.
Fabulous
Another great installment!!!
Excellent
Up to the usual high standard. At the start I was worried that the changing room scene was too repetitive of the plot from earlier episodes, but by the end you'd blown me away. Again.
I just love following Gwen's battle between prude and libertine... it's all so believably written. The plot devices of 'the lady' and 'the slut' are a stroke of genius in allowing you to illustrate Gwen's internal conflicts.
Five stars again!
Totally hooked
I'm completely hooked on the (forgive the pun) expansion of Gwen. Such a wonderful journey, filled with so many little adventures, and with the promise of so many more...
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