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The Vacation Ch. 2

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by Anonymous

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by CajunSteve01/26/04

Love vs Erotica

Who Said Love and Erotica doesn't go together! WOW.. THANKS

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by Anonymous12/05/10

You're a good writer, but I would highly suggest an editor (its "might", not "mite", "your" meaning the possessive vs "you're" the contraction of 'you are', etc.) The spelling errors detract from what is otherwise not a bad story.

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by Anonymous07/18/12

Spelling

Nothing ruins a story like poor spelling. Also $500,000 is NOT rich

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by Anonymous05/27/14

Spelling and grammar

Did you go to school?

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