That was an excellent first story, Badgirloxo, and deserved every one of the five stars I have awarded it! You write well -- please keep at it -- thank you!
Good, naughty first story. I hope you have more to share.
Very good for a first time. You have a very good imagination. I can't help but think you got a bit excited writing this.
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That was an excellent first story, Badgirloxo, and deserved every one of the five stars I have awarded it! You write well -- please keep at it -- thank you!
Good, naughty first story. I hope you have more to share.
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Very good for a first time. You have a very good imagination. I can't help but think you got a bit excited writing this.
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