Consequences Pt. 19

I usually like a happy ending,

but I hope these two wind up in a bitter divorce, hating each other!

1 page is all we get after 2 weeks?????? Disappointed.

So studid...

Just cut to the divorce and be done with it.

hahahaha!!

i hope the sexually deviant traitor ends up rotting in prison or tauted out for a firing squad after gets arrested and convicted of treason!!!! Bradley Manning avoided the death penalty for what he did but Mike needs to die!!!!!!!

One page and it was one page too many.

Seriously, mike needs to be black bagged and dropped in a cell so fast and so deep they'll have to pump air to keep him alive. Addictions are dangerous, they consume you, your family and will destroy them because that is what happens. No addiction ends well.

The only character that seems to learn from their mistakes is Allie. Jen, Mike, Darren, Scott and all the rest are the same stereotypes over and over. They do the same actions over and over expecting different results.

As for your secret agency, why do they need eyes on Mike if they can track his movements so well? Spy satellites, the ability to track anonymous IP address and burner cells...technology so amazing that no one has any secrets...well, except for the bad guys and the non geniuses and criminal type. They seem to be immune to that kind of surveillance.

So we are still on the same theme

A baby is just an item in a sick game, its looked on here as a waste by- product of this game, something like cum, sweat, saliva, baby, just wash it off or drop it in the trash. If this child ever survives, how is she/he going to handle knowing that she/he was just a 'turn on' for a person who is not the father, wondering who is the father from a whole team of perverted sperm donor boyfriends of the mother.

Excellent set up.

I can't wait to see what happens next!

Who pays??

When both the mother and baby are infected......everyone does!

1*

The baboon has found the keyboard that his trainer had hidden.
And the monkey has started again to write this shit.
Why do not you kill yourself?

Be Careful Honey?

Jeez. She says this to a woman who is well on her way to fucking all the men in the New York phone book. With her panting husband's blessing, no less. Careful? Why?

loss of intimacy

Their marriage lacks intimacy, respect, boundaries , romance , passion, and a lot of other things. Mike probably only loves Jen, because she fulfills his fetish. Jen probably only loves Mike because of what he does for her. She can live a hedonistic lifestyle, and have a husband who would support her for it. Seriously what woman would pass that up. Does she love Mike the same way in return? She isn't willing to share him with anyone else. Why not let him date a girl with a smaller vagina. Vaginas do vary in sizes, just like penises. I've dated this one girl who has trouble with just average sized ones, so there are women out there that Mike can satisfy just fine, and build his self-esteem. And cuckold doesn't mean fidelity either. There are cuckolds out there that cheat on their wives also. Probably only a few admit it. Just because your a cuckold, doesn't mean you can't be seduce by a younger and more beautiful woman out there. Even though Jen thinks Mike is a great guy, there are better men out there. She can meet a polyamorous man, who can teach her it is okay to love multiple men and not have to give them up. In return, he can teach her how to share and empathize. You've written scenarios where Mike is the best man. Why can't Jen run into someone who doesn't stand a chance of stealing her away. What happens if Jen runs into a partner who invokes passion desire,love, security, and still lets her fuck around, just as long she does the same in return. You've written a world, where Mike is possibly the best husband material out there. There are post online of cuckolds losing their wives to men who can give them more emotional and physical needs. It is like Mike only lets Jen go out with men who doesn't threaten him at all. There are cuckolds out there that can veto a relationship if the wife falls in love. Some woman view a cuckold as a source of resources and nothing else. They claim they love their husband , but they lack respect for them. Their view is why not stay married to a cuckold, when she can get all the passion and desire out there.They just view their husband as a source of income and security. One woman posted that she lost so much respect for her husband , that she cheats on him and not tells him about the other relationship. Her cuckold lifestyle gotten boring, and the thrill of cheating on him brings her a new level of excitement. Like I have said before, wives of cuckold will leave their husband if someone more successful comes along, and offers a better life. Why stay with a cuckold, when someone invokes love, romance, and desire, plus a great sense of security.

Pretty good so far.....

A story with multiple plots. I'm loving it. The Sapphire story line has me hooked. Thanks.

Hope she doesn't totally humiliate her husband with gay stuff or having someone else's baby. she needs a little self respect she's acting like a total slut that no self respecting man would want if they knew her behavior. She's gonna do a gang bang and everyone she knows at home ,work,his family, and places she hangs out knows that she's fucking guys and not her husband. She can't feel good about herself no matter how much she loves sex and her husband can't have any respect for her or himself . Hope the story can Chang the way there lives are going and have their own kid and live happily ever after

no more rules?

So i guess now that we are fast approaching,wll maybe not fast based on the wait for this chapter and the skimpy progress it made, the end of the consequences sequence you have taken all the rules out of the game for these two. No more please use a condom at all, no more please dont let them cum inside you anymore, no more rul abut ex boyfriends, no more anything. In the last chapter you actually seemed to let Jen have some little semblance about where this could all be heading. How playing this game might not be a good idea, and she was ready to finish. Now in the time frame of your story not only does she throw all that out the window almost immediately after getting off the phone with her husband, she is actually relishing the idea of a gang bang. You are taking this character back down the same road you did in the "Husband's fantasy backfires sequence" minus the heavy drug use. Jen has no respect for herself or her husband and she even states in this chapter "she loved sex, and the constant fucking was turning her into a nympho, the more she got the more she wanted!" Please tell me how that sounds like someone who is tired of playing this selfish game, it sounds like someone who will never be satisfied unless there is a man fucking her. I wish that there was some kind of redemption in the works for these tow characters but to be honest with you it would strain any sense of credulity for this to have a good eneding for them. I picture Mike getting arrested at the airport and Jen waiting for him at penn state, when he doesnt arrive she still goes through with. She thinks maybe his flight got cancelled or delayed. She does it all the time rationalizing that its what mike wants but the truth is it's what she wants. Then the next day comes and she is too wrapped up in her non stop orgy of sex that even when someone tells her Mike has been arrested she just keeps fucking till she is fucked out and exhausted. The aftermath Mikes in prison and she looks in a mirror and see's herself in the true light, she is nothing but a cock hungry whore with or without the game.

The gun is on the table . . .

. . . and it's hammer is pulled back cocked and ready to fire. I would guess the weekend will be an epic sex event unless Mike get's arrested too early, early enough for Jen to call things off. At this point just the sex, even pregnancy isn't enough for the story; there must be something else.

Good chapter Xleg.

Post part 20 please.

Short

1 page after 2 weeks? you are killing me Xleg

THE USUAL GARBAGE

short garbage, thank god

train wreck, but

It is a train wreck heading their way. One of the anonymous is right, Jen is a nympho. Scientist show that sex and new lovers, have the same effect on the brain as cocaine. So sex addiction is possible. If they pull a 180 out of the blue, it wouldn't be a real story. Not a credible one anyways. Like a train wreck, you have to keep watching. This point in time, I can't accept any happy ending. They went down the rabbit hole a little too deep. It would take a long time to crawl back out. Reading this story makes me glad I'm not a cuckold.I love myself too much to settle for anyone who doesn't love me as much in return. Not like Mike could ever quit the cuckold lifestyle, but if Mike ask Jen to quit sleeping around, I highly doubt that she could ever give it up. The more pain and humiliation that Mike goes through, the more he gets obsess with the ideas. Next is chastity and all loss of respect for Mike as a mate. If Mike somehow avoid prison, Jen would only see Mike as a source of income to help her play. Even the thought of Mike as a sexual partner would be disgusting to her.

Thanks!

Thanks for your excellent shot of story...., althought I devour it in no time...

If possible..., write next chapter soon, please ;)

Best regards

Short but not so sweet.

So where's this train wreck headed?

1. Jen locks Mike in chastity, totally sissifies him (she wants him shaved) for the party and parades him naked before everyone, chains him to a chair (yeah hackneyed plot) while proceeding to get gangbanged and the has Colin and Scott force Mike to clean their cocks and eat her out. Disgusted Allie then breaks with Jen completely.

2. Mike triggers the code he hacked into Sapphire, outing the government spying ala Snowden (is that gonna become a new verb, to get Snowdened?), gets arrested, Jen's already prego by one of the gangbangers. She marries Drums while Mike gets butt fucked in prison... But the kids turns out to be Darren's, Allie then decides to fuck around with Drums.

3. Jen starts out flirting at the party, leading all the guys on, and teasing Mike that she's gonna out him as her cuck, she leads everyone at the party to believe she's going to pick one of the guys to get her pregnant, by blowing him in front of everyone, and then at a late hour she pulls Mike center stage, pretending she's going to reveal he's shaved but instead swiftly drops his pants, drops to her knees blowing him and takes him to a room where the would be gangbangers can listen to Jen and Mike fuck. forvthe first time Mike sees Jen cum harder than he ever saw with any of her lovers.

4. At the party Jen tells everyone that Mike is a useless cuck, she has Mike suck Scott so Scott can get her pregnant. Mike gets pushed beyond his breaking point and runs from the party into the street where he is run over by a garbage truck, a fitting end to the story. At his funeral his time bomb in Sapphire goes off posthumously making him a hero (or a villain to some) for revealing the government spying program. Jen in despair, in true Romeo and Juliet style, jumps off a bridge... Only to be caught and saved by Drums monster cock. And they all lived unhappily ever after. The end. Oh wait this story never ends.

ending

is mike setting this up so that she has someone to be with her when everything comes to a head. does he think that he will be completely removed from the picture when is virus in sapphire takes affect? I think Jen should just arrange it so that Mike doesn't get his last wish for Scott to get her pregnant cuz she got to know that in the long run that would just be to much for the both of them. they are really playing with fire here.

Why?

You are clearly losing interest. For the love of Christ, why do you keep writing?

Thanks Xleg

OOAA has it right. Can't wait for the next installment

Enough

You are the only one getting his rocks off. Everyoneelse is disgusted. I think you and Jcuck and suewatcher live under the same roof. Your goal is to pissoff as many people as possiable.

More of the same-ol stuff

I stopped reading each chapter of this story some ago, however I do periodically still check in from time to time.

This story for me is just too sloppy in the story line and lack of character development. To try to keep it moving xlegs adds more people into the already cluttered story, rather than take the time to clean up all the dangling and loose threads. I just gave up.

Perhaps worse was that he has pulled ideas and story lines from other stories and tried to weave them into his story. It just makes it worse. An alternative and parallel universe, really?

It looks like he now intends to subject an innocent child to life of pain and outcast, but at this point it is what i expect from this author. No imagination, no structure.

Its odd that on another site, everyone praises him for being such a brilliant author and he carries on background dialog that often is slamming literotica. Yet here he never bothers to defend of explain his thoughts or story line directions....
Oh well only 15 chapters more before the big unveil.

Surprisingly, their is a not bad secondary story line, the business activities of Jen and Mike that could be a good story on its own.


johnny

Brilliantly written teaser

This one pager is meant as a set up for the grand finale or at least what would be the grand finale for any other writer since X will probably keep rolling on. There were two strategic (I think any way) hints that there is going to be something either very gross or surprising. In the early part of the page Jen decides she wants to pull off something that is going to be hard to do. Later she makes a "snap" decision to do something while talking to Mike. For a listing of very real possibilities of what it might be read the anonymous posting earlier yesterday with the numeric listings.

It would be great if Jen decides to pull a fast one and refuse Mike's games and set up Scott but with X writing it will probably be something more along the lines of Jen humiliating Mike and getting pregnant. What about this as a compromise. Humiliate Mike and trick him into being the one that impregnates her?

Another 5.

Anon.1

Pregnant by another man

Like I did not see that one coming 17 chapters ago.

You like to say the same boring stuff over and over again.

How many chapters have drums and his gang been in the picture?

I seen the Scott situation a long time back too. I knew Mike would want Scott to impregnate Jen.

Now Mike is hurt just because HE pushed Jen away from him when he really needed his wife to be a wife. Mike has no right to be hurt.

I can only see this story ending in tragedy.

But that is the way you roll though. You write and write these scenarios until there is nothing left to write about. Just look at the backfires series. The best story there was the very first one - it was hot. But you could not leave that alone and by the end of that sad tail the Jen of that story was a gross over-sized titted drug abuser who lost quite literally everything including her once brilliant (it turn to mush thanks to the drugs) child abusing whore who cant get enough cock even if she has to rape the poor kid down the street to get it.(wait I hope I did not give you any ideas).

All I am saying is simple, we all know how brilliant a writer you are. But you are long winded for one so brilliant and you have a hard time understanding when to end a story.

I can see how this story will end. I saw long ago before 'Consequences'. Jen and Mike will play these games so much till they realize she is no longer a wife and they end up divorced.

Jasmine will fuck Mike just before he is arrested for espionage. He will have a hefty jail time.

Jen will get pregnant and hook up with the Babies father and never see mike again.

I would not doubt if the father ends up beating Jen left and right after the baby is born.

Again I hope I did NOT give Xleggy any ideas.

John

Jen pregnancy twist

Just an idea. If Jen were to humiliate Mike with a gangbang culminating with Scott to get her pregnant but use a diaphragm and spermicide to prevent it from happening by any of the participants without Mike's, or any of the participant's, knowledge. Then further humiliate Mike by making him use a condom with her denying him the bareback that everyone else just had. After douching to cleanse herself of the other men's seed she deposits Mike's sperm from the condom to get herself pregnant but doesn't tell Mike and let's him believe that it's Scott or one of the other men that knocked her up. It would give Mike the humiliation but would still allow Jen the knowledge that she actually loves Mike by giving him a child of his own albeit without his knowledge. Since xleglover likes to continue the series it could always come up in a later series where after a couple of kids bing conceived this way (or just one time resulting in twins) when one of the kids needs medical attention and Mike ends up being the only compatible donor.

Writing technique is good.

Characters are unlikeable.
The plot is sometimes awful to the point of being unintentionally funny, which brings me back for each new chapter.

The surprise

Now that Jen has decided to fuck everybody bareback, it will leave us in doubt who the actual farther will be. I think Jen is only kidding herself that she really loves Mike. He pushed her sure but she did not have to go along as he left that option to her and Scott. Now there are other players. The band members, Colin, Scott or anyone else she decides to fuck. Why not get Tom and Ricky involved. Maybe even Jamie. There is no doubt that she is going to get pregnant. I have hated Jen most of this series and am starting to feel less sorry for Mike. The author comes without saying is on that list also. He just can't write anything which doesn't feature Jen fucking. Jen finds herself thinking less and less about her husband. I wish he would just dump her and let her fuck anyone she wants. And the comment about making Mike wear a condom when she fucks everyone else bareback is just like our author. If she gets pregnant on purpose I just can't see things ending well. Especially if Scott is the farther as she sees him every day. I also doubt they will stop playing as Jen has a very large sex appetite. If they do try to end with Drums just across town I fully expect her to cheat on Mike . The author has just become too predictable. I hope all drug whore Jen lovers enjoy a pregnant Jen.

Jen has a plan . . .

. . . for Scott, Mike, the shaving and the pregnancy father. The plan goes back to the first Emmanuelle story. At the end of Emmanuelle's first date with the older man who becomes her sexual mentor the old man fucks into Emmanuelle and has the rickshaw driver do him in the butt giving Emmanuelle a double force penetration. Jen is going to do much the same with Mike and Scott with Mike, now shaved, trim and femme looking screwing Jen and Scott buttfucking Mike and into Jen. Mike will cum and impregnate his wife and we can end this story on a happy note for all except Scott who now finds he is really gay and has to go looking for slim, shaved, young femme looking boys.

Just a suggestion Xleg, for what it is worth.

soooooooooo...........

where are the consequences? still waiting...................

Used to defend this series, but it is dragging on way too long and spinning it's wheels without going anywhere. And there's already the threat of a whole other continuation after this. Just end it already, find a point where you are satisfied concluding this story and start working on something fresh. It's getting so convoluted and so hard to follow for anyone who hasn't been reading /years/ worth of your stories at this point, and it's getting too bogged down in plotlines that have nothing to do with what your fans come here to read.

Don't try to turn yourself into some kind of political thriller author while still trying to write cuckolding porn, it's not mixing well.

THE LAUGH CONTINUES

People should stop trying to intellectualise this or cuckolding in general. The storyline is nonsense and written by somebody who lives in a different universe. For the life of me, I cannot understand why wives stay with cucks. Talk of expressions of love when fluffing of bulls or feminization is going on is bizzare. As somebody said, at some point the wife will leave in disgust. The husband can then cruise the gay bars in a free and easy way! There are some weird guys about, if comments on this site are to be believed!

some questions

1. does the author masturbate to the compliments received from the fantasy fans? He's certainly not paying any attention to the many suggestions concerning writing style, plot/character development, etc

2. the 'universe' in which this story takes place doesn't look rational. Can we take this as an accurate reflection of the cuckold mind? A universe of contradictory rationalizations? If so, the story's 'weakness' may be it's strength, an accurate portrayal of the irrationality of this fantasy.

3. how much of this story is an attempt to morally justify an addiction (if not an illness)? The 'happy' ending where Mike gets everything that he wants, with others taking responsibility (e.g., Mike's fantasy is now Jen's and she does all the planning), would reflect this.The ulitimate submissive cuckold fantasy?

Total loss of control.

By both of them. Wow. Unless Jen DOES have something up her sleeve besides total humiliation, this will be the end of them. Too much to recover from. Let's see if XLL is able to retain even a SMIDGE of realism.

Stupid Nigger Bullshit.

Written for stupid little fags, enjoy the filth girls.

Keep it up

I love it... fuck these other readers... keep it going

Very short chapter

Compared to the others. .... I was very anxious to see this chapter, however I would have gladly waited for it .... For a longer version.

Loved this...

but the abrupt ending surprised and slightly disappointed me. Looking forward to the next installment. Looking forward to the sex honestly, and to Jen treating Mike the way he likes (and doesn't like) to be treated.

PLEASE don't let this end in divorce or disaster

Jen & Mike have been through too much. It would betray all of the previous series and this one, and their characters throughout. They DO love each other from what I read. I leave it to you to work how to avoid what seems to be certain impending disaster with the gang bang, Scott, Colin, Sapphire, and the rest. Mike has to be the dad in the end - he has doubts as you have written. Ken

Mike

I use to like the Mike character snd now is indecisiveness, addiction to cuckolding really annoy me now. In previous chapters I did not like Jen's character at all. As the stories unfolded my interpretation of her was of a selfish immature, size queen.
Now I believe she is still mixed up because of Mike's game he keeps indulging Jen on as a major player.
Of course Allie's comments wete to fore warn us readers thst a shite storm is coming Mike and Jen's way.

Personally I am not a fan of cuckolding though I must ssy that the author has a vivid imagination and attention to detail to keep this story going.