The Office Party

ROGER TO-DO CLEAN-UP

Roger to-do clean-up on both Brad and Lisa well Dan goes back to his computer.

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unusual story and very clever. Fun too.
A 5 for being inventive and original.

Your story now that Brad and Lisa have done it and the hubby and Roger the neighbor all know what happened; it can lead to very HOT extra chapters.......... I think Brad has to do Lisa a few more times w/o rushing !!! Yes, having Roger participate and having Dan & Roger clean them up is a great idea !!!

Now you'll have to be more descriptive of how big is Brad vs. Dan and Roger plus what about Lisa's info too..........

Great start and thank you.......... cannot wait for more !!

Actually

Wrong category as we have a cuck and a cheating wife. So, either LW or Group sex, and with Roger involved, without his wife, I guess group is the better one.

Hmmm Poor plot choices

Let's see she goes upstairs and gets soooo upset she comes downstairs and can't function. Yet she took the time to change in between. One action doesn't support the other.

You also have his cock rubbing against her "underthings" one paragraph AFTER he supposedly removed it.

You also mentioned a gold anklet with a black spade which as far as I know means she puts out for black (poor life choices) without explaining why she would have such a thing to begin with. And it certainly wouldn't fit in with the cheating scenario you sketched.

great start

More, please - love each not having the whole story, yet knowing more than the others think they know. More!

Like Turning Facets!

Reading this story reminds me of turning facets, on and off, except cum was running, instead of water! Well, "all's well, that ends well", or does it?! I guess you'll have to give us a sequel, so we can find out.

I liked it

Again, maybe some technical difficulties, nothing an editor could not help with, but the story, the slut, the need, the cum and more cum and all the cocks........good job, love a slut that is filled over and over as I expect to see in chapter 2 of "The Office Party Cums Home". LOL

Keep writing, you have enjoyable story lines, easy to follow most of the time and a desire to the the lady / slut in the story. Good girl. Hugs, Nadine