You're a good story-teller but a lousy writer. Grammar, punctuation, spelling, sentence structure, syntax are laughably bad. Makes it difficult to take your effort seriously. I like that the story isn't rushed, but at times it borders on the absurd.
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You're a good story-teller but a lousy writer. Grammar, punctuation, spelling, sentence structure, syntax are laughably bad. Makes it difficult to take your effort seriously. I like that the story isn't rushed, but at times it borders on the absurd.
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