Love the build-up, good dialog, can't wait for next chapter...
Don't mean to rush but hurry along with next chapter. I'm an old man would hate to drop dead and miss something.
Your next publication should include Alex and Abbey finally having sex.
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Best I've read in ages
Love the build-up, good dialog, can't wait for next chapter...
Just A Little Nudge
Don't mean to rush but hurry along with next chapter. I'm an old man would hate to drop dead and miss something.
Alex and Abbey
Your next publication should include Alex and Abbey finally having sex.
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to 3 Families Vol. 01 Ch. 05 or
More submissions by RicoLouis.