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Head and Shoulders Knees and Toes

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by todski2807/07/14

ha

without stuck tongue is a really good word pairing, the three T's make the words trip over each other just enough to give a sense of it.

as to the biting...........

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by tazz31707/07/14

DRINK DRINK DRINK

let all lusty young lovers just drink, Not Sip. tk u mlj lv nv

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by Trixareforkids07/07/14

I'll have a shot of this!

I enjoy you lack of punctuation, it forces multiple readings and you give so much to your writing that even when it's incomprehensible it's enjoyable to read again and again.

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by susansnow07/08/14

Thanks!

Thanks for all the feedback.

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