The Voice of Reason

I like the thought progression in this poem. What you say is well worth saying and forms a very good paean to someone who has saved you (such paeans often come over as cheesy & yours does not).

The difficulty I have with this poem is the heavy rhyming and rhythm that goes tum-ti-tum in my head. This for me gets in the way of what would be a signicantly good poem. That is just my personal feeling of course.

I liked this and felt it.
Meter and rhyme worked for me but that is because it's my thang ;-)