There seems to be potential for this story, but in it's current format, feels forced and "staccato" in it's presentation. Is it possible you could take a look and expand on this? Otherwise, not too bad.
Loved to be seduced by a sissy. ;-)
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There seems to be potential for this story, but in it's current format, feels forced and "staccato" in it's presentation. Is it possible you could take a look and expand on this? Otherwise, not too bad.
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Loved to be seduced by a sissy. ;-)
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