This is a beautiful story. There are few things tougher than moving on after the death of a spouse, believe me, I know. I love the way he returned to her and not only gave her permission to love someone else, but actually encouraged her to do so. That's the mark of a man that truly loves his wife. My only criticism of the story is a little one; more of a nit-pick, really. The ending leaves you wanting more. Maybe you did it deliberately because you plan to write more about Chloe. If so, great! If not, then more closure would be appreciated.
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Cute Story***
Thanks for sharing.
beautiful
This is a beautiful story. There are few things tougher than moving on after the death of a spouse, believe me, I know. I love the way he returned to her and not only gave her permission to love someone else, but actually encouraged her to do so. That's the mark of a man that truly loves his wife. My only criticism of the story is a little one; more of a nit-pick, really. The ending leaves you wanting more. Maybe you did it deliberately because you plan to write more about Chloe. If so, great! If not, then more closure would be appreciated.
Short but Good
A nice story, one I think most romance writers have expounded on a lot more in their books, but for this site, the right length.
A good start
I enjoyed, thoroughly, the setting and early development. Hurry with the next part(s)!
nicely done....
not my usual fare but once I got into it - I liked it a lot! Great start....hint hint
What next?
Romantic and sexy, a delightful combination. Has Chloe found her new beau? Has she started to "live" again? Answers please, Nymph.
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