Upon a Savage Shore Ch. 04

No worries

I haven't read the other story; I'm intrigued. However, don't stop! I am really enjoying the writing. Keep it up!

Keep up the great work.

First of all, you are doing a great job in developing the characters and storyline. Keep up the good work.

Next, yes, there are some similarities to your story and that of Kita'thallia and you are wise to not read any more of that story so as to not influence yourself in the development of your story. That being said, remember, similar themes exist in all sorts of literature. There is a story I read on here about a machine that allowed someone to see back in time and also to "watch" what was going on anywhere at any time. This is very similar to a story by Arthur C Clark, but I am enjoying it here as well. Develop your story and keep going without fear. You are doing great and I want to continue the adventure. I will tell you now that there is already enough of a difference between yours and the Kita story that you need to keep going. I love the development and interaction of the four characters you have created and look forward to seeing where you will take them.

Best of luck and keep going!

Great going...

I'm enjoyed every chapter and looking forward to reading more. Thank you.

Good tail...take that however you want :)

Great story...more more...driving my furry desires nuts...

Really enjoy this story. Keep it up. Hit wrong button on my vote way to low.

A pleasure

It is such a pleasure to read something that is well plotted, well written, and well edited.

Have you written for other venues?

every day

I keep checking everyday for a new chapter. This is fantastic!!!!!!

I'm hooked!

Each chapter seems better than the last.

This story?!?

Sweet........ Baby.......... Jesus!!!!!!! How can one story be SO FREAKING GOOD?!?! This story is like true literature. I can clearly see the environment, inhabitants and all sorts of things based on your wonderful descriptions! If your story was crack, I'd be a damned addict! To hell with a five, I give this story a f-ing TEN!

great story, however I think you should add at least one sex story in each of the chapters. Also some more furry inhabitants could join from the other island

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Amazing story 10/10

Okay, a few things:

1. Yes, it is similar to Kita'thalla, but, honestly, there are some pretty distinct and noticeable differences, chief among them the 'multiple females' bit.
2. I DON'T FUCKING CARE HOW CLOSE IT IS, KEEP WRITING.

Also, I doubt you'd be in danger of having your plot 'crossed' with Kita'thalla's in any way.
THEY still haven't fucked yet, while Liam 'Lucky Bastard' Carter here has already done the deed, and has two more lined up for him.

MOAR.
AI NEEDZ MOAR.

Praise

Great story can not wait for further adventures of the four and how they develop as a family

Mind blown

This story is without a doubt the best piece of sci-fi/adventure/action/erotica ive ever read. Drawn to the story and character development and it truly feels like a story rather than smut with a splash of backstory. KEEP THESE CHAPTERS COMING!!!!!!

Dude "Clotilda"!? Seriously! You couldn't have just called her 'Klat' or something? She sounds like a medical condition now.
Anyhoo, great story so far. Love all the little details. Love the little sex-obsessed kitten. Now, onwards to next chapter...

another good one

So this was a good chapter. I liked the combat and the exploration of cultural differences. i realized I forgot to mention I'm still a bit confused about the tree trunk they are living in. Is it like 4-5 feet tunnel inside?

lmfao learn history

was the second wife of the Frankish king Clovis I, and a princess of the kingdom of Burgundy

still rated 5 star in my book.

Good story and really not that close to Kita'thallia. Clotilda is one of the three fates. Keep writing!

third time reading this story ;)

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Loving it

Loving it
JC

I guessed it!

A chapter or two ago, when he was first looking for shorter names for the women, I thought "he should call the short one Clotilda!"

So I was quite pleased when he reached the same conclusion!