"Yes, Brother."

keep it going!

I hope you keep the story going. It got me so hard and I want to know if he'll use it on his mom too.?c

Too short

Please keep it up. I liked the story. And maybe after days of service to her brother, she will admit she wasn't under hypnosis and freely did it.

Response

Sorry, but I don't plan on continuing this story. I might if I feel like it, but I don't plan on it. Also if I do continue it:
1. I love brother/sister action but for whatever reason mom/son still creeps me out.
2. As my name implies my favorite fetish is mind control/manipulation, the sister isn't doing this willfully.

Thanks for reading though and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Soldiers?

...'Still gently massaging her soldiers, I spoke again, calmly.' Are you completely happy to post a story with a glaring typo so early in [just a couple of hundred words written] you wrote 'soldiers' but meant, shoulders? If so, you must assume your readers are as ignorant as you? I gave up at that point.

Me and my black friends are coming to pay a visit to Southlondoner .

how many soldiers does an 18 year old nerd girl have?

"gently massaging her soldiers"?

how many "soldiers" does an 18 year old nerd girl have?

since this is an erotic story, i need to know two things, were the soldiers male or female, and exactly what part of their bodies were you massaging?

or did you mean, perhaps, "gently messaging her soldiers"? if so, what sorts of gentle messages where you sending?

or was it "gentile massaging her soldiers"? i mean, most Jews have better things to do with their time, right?

"Soldiers"

That was one horrible typo, how did I not catch that? Wish I could edit this thing after putting it up.

Quality

Also SouthLondoner, you do realize what this website is? It's smut. We are on a website where "Sister Sucks Sleeping Sibling" is currently listed at the right side of the screen and evidently has a 4.62 out of 5 rating.

For me, many hours of every day is spent forming stories, characters, plotlines, and forming them into coherent narratives for others to enjoy. This and the story before it "The Artifact," were quick off the top of my head one-offs written because I was horny. I'm not saying my readers on here are ignorant, I just don't care enough to have more then one quick revision. That's time and effort that could go into my more important work.

garbage as usual

either do a better job editing or stop posting your trash is not worth reading. put your EGO aside and show some pride in your work and a whole lot of respect for your readers. if I was the web master you would be banned and your crap deleted.

that was great, please post more

I really liked this one, thanks

Hasty

Live in haste repent at leisure, a truly fast seduction ! how could she resist at any level (picked up tips from gumpf the caveman ;-)

Yes Brother

Your story was very good enough to give me a hard on. The only thing is you had anal with her instead of going after her sweet young pussy, and you had the chance to lick and suck her sweet pussy ( snatch ). Other wise like I said it was good enough to give me a hard on!