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Wow
I'd love to serve as her feet cleaner and toilet. She can squat over my face anytime. More please.....
Congratulations!
You have written a fine first story. 'Domme' might have been more appropriate as a title, but that is a minor detail. Very well done - five stars.
more...........
lots of promise. good descriptions, good dialog. i prefer more tension, more interaction or at least descrption of the mental aspects. If you post more I will read them. I want t hear more about that ass that got him into this mess. nice 1st story.
2nd chapter coming soon
Thank you guys!
Currently working on the second chapter.
Will be online soon ;)
2nd chapter coming.
I'll be publishing the second and maybe third chapter of the story on monday. Stay tuned!
Second chapter published
I've uploaded the second chapter. I wrote this in kind of a hurry, i don't really have any time to write right now, hope things will get better from the next week.
I'm going to focus more on the interaction between the two main subjects and going to add a few "distractions" in the plot to let the whole thing flow a lil bit better and avoid repetition.
The third chapter is in the works, and its name is "An ass so magnificent"
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