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by MADISONKAI07/13/14

5 stars.

Nice start, looking forward to the next chapter. Hopefully it comes with more length.

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by 63lsmith07/14/14

4 STARS

4 stars for good writing, it was a good lead in, but should have gone a little further.
Looking forward to more, hopefully longer and some action.

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