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Lines 7 & 8 are great and accentuate the first part of the sonnet so well.
Nicely done.
Quite not
the standard for either here or sonnet
Kudos -5ed
However, am I to assume the periods are a deliberate omission
O my
Very nice
GM said what I would have had I known how. 5'd
Gratitude
Thank you all for your generous ratings and comments! I greatly appreciate it, and hope to have time to submit more work soon.
And yes, the lack of periods is intentional. I prefer the feel and appearance of it that way, for some reason.
Seduced!
Agree about the superb lines 7 & 8 - indeed, the whole of the second stanza is a story in itself. Overall, soothingly seductive (and I'm male!).
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