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Not nearly as good as chapter 1
No refresher on the characters? Isn't the neighbor an older guy who is a widower or his wife left him? Isn't the main character middle aged and his wife is out of town for the weekend? No recip? Just a poorly executed story about a good idea.
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The main character according to the first part is married, and his wife went on vacation. Tony, the neighbor was married with his wife passing away, and he has a girlfriend, and male lover too.
Semi-castrated submissive male [testicles removed already]; I also need a verile STD free dominant man to fuck me up the ASS!
Yes: I need neighbour like this!
Please find another hobby
I thought Chapter 01 was deliberately off-kilter; that the grammatical missteps and goofy sentence structure were meant to solicit criticism from that segment of anal-compulsive readers who freak out over every misspelled word and missing comma. If I'm right, then enough is enough; your style has quickly become tedious and boring. If I'm wrong, this may be the most idiotic story on Literotica. Find another hobby!!
I love the comments!
Faggot 'haters' that are here reading about cock sucking while the pull on their little puds.......
you need an editor
your story isn't horrible, but you need someone to proof read it so it is fully understandable and makes sense.
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