Hate to say it, but disappointing. Sammy was somewhat bland and seemed to be of no relevance to the main theme. Alex, though it took a bit longer than for the father, also seems to have thrown in the towel, while Timmy's religious principles disappeared in record time. Nikki breezed though it without much thought at all.
Rather than the emotions of Nikki rebelling against lifelong restrictions, it was more just a description of two sex acts. Not, in my view, what constitutes enticing erotic literature.
Sorry to be so critical, but I had high expectations after reading the first chapter. Hope my comments are of some assistance.
the story felt almost like nikki; leaving us all frustrated just when it started getting hot but I'm sure further chapters will show it leading somewhere. you're really making us work for it, fun story/series. please keep going
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Anonymous05/15/16
oh yes
well that's all I need, your words have gotten me excited, well written I think I like nikki. lol
English
WOW
This was a good story. Hoping for part 3 soon
Too easy?
Hate to say it, but disappointing. Sammy was somewhat bland and seemed to be of no relevance to the main theme. Alex, though it took a bit longer than for the father, also seems to have thrown in the towel, while Timmy's religious principles disappeared in record time. Nikki breezed though it without much thought at all.
Rather than the emotions of Nikki rebelling against lifelong restrictions, it was more just a description of two sex acts. Not, in my view, what constitutes enticing erotic literature.
Sorry to be so critical, but I had high expectations after reading the first chapter. Hope my comments are of some assistance.
got hot then stopped
the story felt almost like nikki; leaving us all frustrated just when it started getting hot but I'm sure further chapters will show it leading somewhere. you're really making us work for it, fun story/series. please keep going
oh yes
well that's all I need, your words have gotten me excited, well written I think I like nikki. lol
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