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Giving Nikki Away Pt. 02

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by DragonFisting07/11/14

Damn, I feel sorry for him

Damn, I do feel sorry for him.It must be agonizing for your brain to be hardwired that way. On the cuckold connection tribe, there are cuckold men who are in agony and yet can't help be who they are. One of the cuckold told her lover that the lover is now the husband, and the cuckold told the wife that she is now the lover's wife. He is a provider, while they are happy in love. Here is an example of one of the post "Mike
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Re: falling in love Thu, January 21, 2010 - 2:24 PM
My wife has fallen in love with her bull. We started in the cuckold lifestyle 6 years ago, after I became disinterested in swinging because I felt intimidated and would be humiliated when I could not perform. My wife suggested that she just see other men, and we discovered the cuckold lifestyle online. I found I liked the whole concept because I no longer felt the pressure of having to perform. It was supposed to be kind of a casual thing with her dating men and telling me about it. Eventually, however, she met a man she really liked and started seeing him exclusively. She fell in love with him and they both told me so. I was crushed and humiliated, but I found I was able to cope with the negative feelings by allowing them to arouse me in a masochistic way. She insisted that she still loved me but in a different way than him, and I found myself unable to leave her due to my deep love for her and my arousal with the situation. She taught me to channel my jealousy, humiliation, and feelings of inferiority into sexual arousal.

After I told them both that I would accept their relationship, he insisted that she cut me off, which she happily did. I am now pretty much a financial provider for them both, but I feel that in a way she cares about me because she is always sure to address my masochistic needs through humiliation, clean-up, etc. More recently, she has been living with him for longer periods, while I support them, and she will call me to humiliate me and have me masturbate to the sounds of their lovemaking. I guess most would say they are both using me, but I feel it is a role I am suited for. "

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by Anonymous07/11/14

Story

If the first story was bad then this is a pile of crap and that's not because it's a
cuckold story, it's just crap.

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by Anonymous07/11/14

Written by one really fucked up person.

What total garbage. Can't believe any sane person would have the gall to write and post such total sick trash.

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by impo_5807/11/14

She said...

She said: "I'm yours. Claim me."...And also: "Besides your dignity?" ...after what she said why stay married with him? A guy without dignity, a guy she didn't respect...I know it was his fault, and he deserved what happened, but after she be in love with the boyfriend, why stay married with him? Just for him when he got back she let him hold her hand while the boyfriend fucked her? I say that cuckolding is good if both agree, but above cuckolding must always be LOVE and RESPECT!!! The story could be very good, but missing these two aspects made it a 1 *.

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by Anonymous07/11/14

Humiliation is Not Erotic

It is the absolute antithesis of eroticism.Sad really

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by Anonymous07/11/14

Great Story Sam

Can't wait till part 03

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by Anonymous07/11/14

What. The. Fuck? In the words of Inigo Montoya: I do not think that word means what you think it means.

I am referring to love. Love is putting the other person first, so at what point does she put Mark first?
If she prefers Matt sexually, romantically and belongs to him, what's left for Mark? If she wants to be with Matt, why not divorce Mark and be with him or does she stay with Mark just to hurt him and of that is the case, that's still not love. You don't deliberately hurt someone you love.

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by Anonymous07/11/14

Hubby gets what he deserves

With a friend like Matt and a wife like Nikki who needs enemies. Hubby has a choice to make if he is going to be a servant and go sexless if he stays or walk away and divorce her and let her live out the rest of her life with Matt. To be honest if you choose the first choice it will be painful 24/7. On the other hand you can eventually start over and have a family of your own. If not, enjoy bringing up Matt's kids. Nice story and well written. Wonder which path hubby will take!

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by Anonymous07/11/14

So now you have to delete comments?

Why can you just face up to what you are?

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by Anonymous07/11/14

1 wonderful *

I think that a stupid baboon does not deserve more

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by Anonymous07/11/14

Don't mind the haters

I don't know why people read stuff that obvious offends me.

Great series, keep writing!

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by Anonymous07/11/14

re: anonymous-don't mind the haters

What did you just write? Who said some of us read these stories? The title, the tags and mostly the comments give it away. Just another willing cuckold story written for the minority sickos on this site. An automatic 1* is given to any story related to this theme. Don't like it. Complain to the site owners. Maybe they'll give you your own category.

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by Anonymous07/12/14

If Only

If only you could write a story that was original. But hey! Look on the bright side. This story is just like all of the other cuckold stories. Aren't we lucky!!

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by OOAA07/12/14

Great story!!!!!!!!!!!

Congrats!

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by Anonymous07/12/14

I hate strawberry ice cream

I like chocolate ice cream. I hate strawberry.

Nobody should eat strawberry ice cream. Anybody who does is stupid. They should stop making strawberry ice cream.

There should be a special store where strawberry ice cream is sold so that I won't have to look at those horrible cartons on the shelf in my store. I hate those strawberry ice cream cartons. They make me so ANGRY!!!

Sometimes I have to eat a whole carton of strawberry ice cream to remind myself how much I hate it, so that I can get really angry and complain that the store still sells it when it is so nasty and horrible that no one should eat it.

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by ADVOCATE7007/13/14

Perfect sweet cuckolding

This is how it is done: sexy, not mean. A girl gets way more of what she wants by talking sexy to her prospective cuck rather than being so mean to him all the time. I thought that there was no way he was going to pop knowing what was on the line, but I would have done it willingly too if she told me those things.

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by Anonymous07/13/14

another moron with a pen

and a grudge against our brave servicemen. Wha'happen'd? Get Article 32'd outta the service for being a fag?

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by Anonymous07/14/14

Outstanding story

There are a lot of cuckold stories out there but you really did it so well. The whole girlfriend theme, doing it long distance while being helpless was a master stroke (!) Only complaint - you cant take 2 months to come up with the next chapter. I nearly forgot the first chapter.

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by Anonymous07/14/14

Good stuff

Waiting for chap 3. Ignore the haters

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by Anonymous07/15/14

Keep makin' more!

"This is how it is done: sexy, not mean. " I couldn't agree more with the other commenter about this. I hate it when shit gets too mean and cruel. You've got a really good balance of teasing and humiliation and the way it's delivered doesn't make me want to groan and throw the story to the side. Please keep making these! They're so good.

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by Anonymous07/15/14

Fantastic

A truly wonderful story. Well written, well paced. Ignore the fools who dissed it.

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by Anonymous07/17/14

good story keep going

please keep writing

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by Anonymous08/03/14

When's Chapter 3? hope you post it soon.

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by Anonymous08/04/14

loved it , voted 5 stars ... (even though it hurt)

looking forward to chapter 03.

really like your writing style , enjoyed the story .
great plot very well written.

only problem i have is with the husband being in
the armed services & on deployment
those guys have enough to deal with when away from home.

wish you had put the hubbie in a 6month work contract overseas.
engineer / oil worker / architect , etc ..

anyhow is still a great story ,
just made me wince a little each time i thought
of the poor fucker trying to deal with all the emotional angst while being deployed.
not having your mind on the job / being distracted by stuff @ home.
his buddies should have picked up on it. coz am sure it would affect his duties.

maybe in the next chapter he can shoot his foot , coz he forgets to safety his weapon.
maybe he can screw up in one of a thousand ways ,coz his brain is doing backflips over what his wife is upto back home.

xxxhugsxxx

godbless & be well

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by Anonymous08/04/14

Love It.

I'm enjoying the story, especially the band and forth between the couple. That's always the hottest part when done well, and you've done it well.

Can't wait for the next part.

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by Anonymous08/04/14

Great Story

Can't wait to hear about his return home when he gets to prepare, watch and handle clean up duty before getting his reward!

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by Anonymous08/07/14

it makes me very angry...even though I'm a wife....

But I still like the story

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by Anonymous08/11/14

Story by and for pathetic losers.

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by o1dirtydog08/12/14

Waiting for part 3...

as is my wife! Don't leave us hanging for too long! We are both following this story and find it amazing so far!

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by Anonymous08/14/14

BS

3 sick perverts. May they each get what they deserve.

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by Anonymous08/15/14

Get Out

Divorce "Nikki" the slut, the CHEATING-ADULTEROUS-Slut. Have divorce papers in hand for her when you arrive home- I hope Mark was smart enough to record the little liaison from Skype and to sue "former friend" Matt for alienation of affections. These two need to go down hard for this bullshit.
Mark needs to find himself a woman who will love him for him. Not one like this "piece of work", who obviously has held a grudge since their wedding night. These two clowns deserve each other.
I too want to see the next chapter in this series . To see what kind of humiliating Crap that they are going to try pull on Mark. I'm sorry to say, but if this had been done to me; the coroner would be probably be taking two to the morgue after this ultimate betrayal by my wife (who I thought loved me unconditionally) and someone whom I thought was my best friend. This whole story is just a sad, sad thing to do to a service man on deployment for his country, DAMN these two for all of this ! ! !

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by tazz31708/15/14

MY COMMENT ON THE CHAPTER 1 WAS IN ERROR

I found out how stupid and what he is. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Anonymous08/23/14

angst

very well written story . author manages to totaly mindfuck the readers.
was really disturbed by the plot , not my genre of interest .
did i like the storyline/plot ? ... No
was the story well written ? ....Yes
will i read the next chapter ? ... Yes ,

am looking forward to seeing how the Author develops this story.
i really don't like storys where so called best friends & loving spouses screw over a person they supposedly care deeply about. .. but the Author totaly does a job on the reader with a truly remarkable depth of emotions ,delivered in so few pages.
so i will read any further additions purely because of the Authors quality of writing.


xxxhugsxxx

p.s
Samson801....
you are going to be loved by those that value quality writing
& hated by those that cannot get past the subject matter you are writing about.

am looking forward to you writing on other topics/genres to see if you can deliver a similar quality pce of work.
which in turn should result in you getting the 4.5+ scores your work deserves ,

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by Anonymous08/27/14

LET HIM WIN OUT

Please let the soldier who served our country win out in the end! Let him grow some balls, come to his senses and kick his traitorous friend's ass! Please don't let Nikki and the traitor win out over him!!!

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by Anonymous09/04/14

more please!

Where's chapter 3?

Have her get pregnant with Matt while her hubby watches in person!

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by Anonymous09/04/14

not a loving wife just a slut

I know this is just a story,But it does not make any sence. Not a very good story either. So if there is more to it then i will never know how it ended. Because i am bored with this
sorry, no ryme or reason lame story. if you can call it a story. One of the worst i have ever read on this site. Sorry but this sucks.

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by Anonymous09/23/14

Will there be another chapter?

Hope you will post soon.

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by Sub_Hubbie09/27/14

To Anon of the strawberry ice cream

Anon you are just another stupid strawberry ice cream hater. The van said it sold ice cream, you bought it, ate it and now you are complaining. Why the fuck did you eat it, you moron. You should be stomped on by us real ice cream eaters! People like you make me sick.

Lol. Meanwhile, samson801, bring on the next serving... Some of us are honest enough to admit we love this strawberry ice cream, and you are serving some of the best. 5*.

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by Anonymous10/22/14

More

Add some more chapters! Soon!

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by honeylicker112411/03/14

This is real erotica

...but I bet hubby comes homes and takes his .45 and blows both of them away, while in bed. And it would be justifiable homicide. 5 stars

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by Anonymous11/10/14

Belongs on a different website

Idiotica.

Nobody I know in the military would have any part of this bullshit.

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by Anonymous12/04/14

Only one thing

When are we getting chapter 3?!?

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by chauncygardner12/24/14

great cuck

hub should be locked in a spike cage when he gets back, and fed viagra while being cucked, and made to clean up!

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by kuk4yoo04/13/15

Luv it!

Will there be more?

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by TornadoTys08/10/15

Wrong Category !

There tbis story may be cuckold heaven for cucks on this site.
It is IMO in the wrong category as Loving Wife's should be about relationships on the edge, not a fetish like cuckolding.

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by Anonymous08/11/15

sorry asshole.

But you are not straight.

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by Anonymous08/25/15

Not even remotely believable

She'd get the divorce papers the next day. He does have some real friends right? He should look his wife in the face and tell her and Matt to start running and never stop. When he gets home he's going to slice them up into little pieces and feed those pieces to the fishes. There won't be a next time because he's not taking any more calls from her. Stupid story.

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by Anonymous08/30/15

Oh Bother

Boy oh boy aren't you something. Do you dress up in girls clothing as well as sit to pee. Who cut off your balls? This might be your fantasy, but do you really feel the need to letting the world know it. What a waste..

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by Anonymous09/08/15

Not as bad as some presumptious asses would have you believe

The "Critics"of this story seem to believe that this is a poorly written story. Its Not. . . You need to remember, these stories are works of fiction or may have a basis in reality with copious embellishment.. . .

Lay off who ever the hell you are. If you want to be literary critics, Go apply at the NYT. . .good luck

Now about the story, Story line is facinating with a twist or two. It has an interesting ending. A bit much for my taste as far as cuckold lit goes. Hardness factor was about a 7 or so.

Its a worthy effort. . . I enjoyed it.

Wesley

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by Anonymous09/22/15

complete and utter disrespect by the bitch

someone needs to grow a pair and walk away.

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