All Comments on 'I Hot Tub with Nancy'

I don't know what it is about fantasy that an author seems to think that they have to use a condom on someone when they fuck. Knocking up someone just adds to the possible fantasy.

This story would have been great, without the birth control.

I disagree with what other posters have said. Safe sex should be encouraged, even in fiction stories.

No seduction - no build up - not even believable. At least let their be some seduction of her - even if she only pretends to be reluctant.