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by Anonymous

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by Trixareforkids07/10/14

Again

I love how you twist and turn a phrase.

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by Prufrocknroll12/06/14

Left Turn at Albuquerque

This poem, like many of yours, takes me on a ride to a destination I never can anticipate. I get lost in your poetry. I stumble into walls, tear apart words and phrases that echo confounding reverberations I can’t quite place-- while carefully placed silences glimmer with hints. For Instance, I love how the reader is dropped into the work as if from a vacuum; the poem roars ahead, while my mind is lost in space. I read and listen for traditional markers, but am left with the directions of my own imagination... and the desire to come back to it. Great work!

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by susansnow12/06/14

Prufrock

Great pseudonym. Thank you for your feedback; I'm flattered. I may have some words for your work too. :)

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