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Dark Side of the Force Ch. 01

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by Anonymous02/17/16

Power went to his head

You completely lost me with the direct, criminal abuse of power at the end.
Troy's sociopathic attack on the dog abuser and subsequent behavior with Woodburn makes me hate him like I hate the Oliver Norths of this country.
You have written such exciting stories but Troy has become no more than an SS officer

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