Great start. More please.
sound promising, definitely keep it up
Story has potential. A slow start but I am looking forward to seeing how creative you are with the tutoring!
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! orBack to The Four Hour Erection Ch. 01 orMore submissions by dbrains.
[...]
Edit comment orSubmit Comment
Posting...
Comment posted successfully - click here to view it or write another.
Title of your comment:
Your public comment about The Four Hour Erection Ch. 01:
Please type in the security codeYou may also listen to a recording of the characters.
Preview comment
Title your feedback:
Your feedback to dbrains:
If you would like a response, enter your email address in this box:
Send feedback
Sending...
Feedback sent successfully - click here to write another.
Username:
Password:Forgot your password?
Security code:
Your current user avatar, all sizes:
You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.
Select new user avatar:
Upload and save Cancel
User avatar uploaded successfuly and waiting for moderation.
Close
English
Great start. More please.
good start
sound promising, definitely keep it up
Pleasant start
Story has potential. A slow start but I am looking forward to seeing how creative you are with the tutoring!
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to The Four Hour Erection Ch. 01 or
More submissions by dbrains.