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Learning How to Lose

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by Anonymous

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by twelveoone07/13/14

3rd line

drags, needs more punch. 2 thinks. try sense change
I could see clearly
as a suggestion
5ed

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by tazz31707/13/14

DONT FORGET

bad habits are hard to Brake, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Cleardaynow07/13/14

Thank you 1201

You are right. I fooled myself that the repitition gave emphasis - wrong. However I think 'I could see clearly' is too definite.

I think I prefer

He said "Living is learning how to lose".
I think that he meant it too.
But I suspect really
He hoped that he was wrong.

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by Ashesh907/15/14

U know Clearday :

Leo Messi is gonna appreciate your words esp. after losin' the hard-fought Final !!?? 5-ed

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by Oldbear6307/16/14

But

Meaning it or not, and what he hoped for aside, he was right, just not completely right. Excellent Clearday, You pack a lot of feeling in 4 lines.

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