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3rd line
drags, needs more punch. 2 thinks. try sense change
I could see clearly
as a suggestion
5ed
DONT FORGET
bad habits are hard to Brake, TK U MLJ LV NV
Thank you 1201
You are right. I fooled myself that the repitition gave emphasis - wrong. However I think 'I could see clearly' is too definite.
I think I prefer
He said "Living is learning how to lose".
I think that he meant it too.
But I suspect really
He hoped that he was wrong.
U know Clearday :
Leo Messi is gonna appreciate your words esp. after losin' the hard-fought Final !!?? 5-ed
But
Meaning it or not, and what he hoped for aside, he was right, just not completely right. Excellent Clearday, You pack a lot of feeling in 4 lines.
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