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I loved the twist. Waiting for more!
Critics... Jeez
Nice, sequel?
Good imagination
not everything has to be realistic
W, dont letWhich is why, when considering how AMAZING this story was, its obvious it deserves five stars. Also i'm happy you didn't post it in gay male. The majority of stories I enjoy have gay overtones, but i dont really enjoy stories that lack the feminine element, which most stories in that section lack. Thus, if you had put this story in that section, then i would have been sorely dissapointed because it is a great story and i really did enjoy it. btw dont let the haters get to you
Great job!
Loved the story! I cummed after reading it =)
great story reALLY HOT and well wrote
Eloquent and moving
There's gunna be a HUNT
Cuz he wants to be a CUNT!
More!
Please add more!
morning after
the drunk wakes up with a sore ass and remembers what happened. with
the hang over he wants to kill himself. the man whore just found new pray.
This story isn't entirely without merit and I can see lots of people have enjoyed it. For me, the premise was ok, but with a few tweaks, such as practicing a feminine voice, or making the character less obviously masculine to begin with might have led to it being more believable.
very good story
Thoroughly enjoyed this story. Quite different than most others. keep writing... looks like it could be a very interesting plot line.
Good Start
Not too bad for a first time story. Please continue.
Loved it
Gorgeous.
I used Halloween as one of my earliest opportunities to dress fem in public. ;-)
Nice memories.
Xxxxx
Rebecca
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