Daddy's Pretty Girl

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great story. well written. hot!

One Perspective...

From the female/daughter perception. Entertaining, continual pace and well written. I will admit I could not associate that well from the female perspective; but, that in no way lessened the quality of the story/writing. Thank you.

great! love how you took some time establishing, but not too much. more please, and longer if you could :)

Thanks!

Thank you so much, guys! This is my first attempt so I really appreciate the feedback. I'll do my best to add a new chapter soon, and to keep your thoughts and ideas in mind.

Great story---

That was a hot and sexy to read for real virgins.

hoty

loved it

whats the hurry?

Well written but why jump in so fast? There has to be a slow build up to the first "touch" along with a little resistance and guilt coupled with reasoning and determination to fulfil one's insestious desire. I think if you slow it down a bit you'd be more enjoyable to read.

There was one thing that I could have done without and that's the way she enjoyed being ravished and roughly fucked by her daddy's thick cock all while being a teenaged virgin.... That's just not realistic.

this was a very hot story. i found the descriptions really great. been waiting for more for a while now...