Wow, I wouldn't know of any solution. Their gene has to be altered in some way , and there is not a thing that can be done. Unless you can genetically reverse engineer the altered gene. Genetics isn't a strong subject for me. If they had any children, would that trait be passed on? 5 for being really different
Sorry, HDK, but you're starting to believe your own fantasies about 11 inch cocks and endless male orgasms.
As for the category, how is this different (though more imaginative) than the hundreds of stories in LW where the wife is slipped a date rape drug (appearing in half of JPB's stories)?
Sorry to be a bitchy little girl, but since commentators can say anything they want, so can I.
A clear Sci-Fi Fiver! Agree with Impo! Only trouble is that in Sci-Fi, the 'magic cream aphrodisiac' will be even more obvious than it was in LW! Loved it. Thanks to Hapless for designing the 'Breeding Period with Irene' to be in the future!
So many people complain about LW stories that are boring and devoid of originality, and yet here is a story that is both interesting and original...and people still complain. You truly can't please all the people all the time!
This was a fun story to read, and I have no problem deviating from reality when it's well-written fantasy such as this. The only problem I had with the story line was that Jim and Irene couldn't salvage their marriage, given the extraordinary circumstances of his infidelity. There is a bit of "magical thinking" in the premise that sex with another person can be so incredible that it would compel you to abandon a loving and fulfilling marriage. But again, I'm able to suspend that disbelief and enjoy the story for what it is.
Thanks for sharing it!
P.S. -- If you are 31+ years old and you have never had sex two or more times in a span of a few hours, you clearly haven't been with the right woman!
I really had a good time reading this story. That's a great big yes! The thing about the pheromone drug was utter nonsense, and that was a super big no! I'm not into Science Fiction. I don't dislike it; I just don't look for it. But the story was so delightfully and interestingly silly I had to slap a great big five on it. I liked Colleen.
Now you understand 'Hapless' you're not John Steinbeck, but neither am I. This story was just the right length and just the right kind of silliness to provide a terrific break from the usual daily crap I have to deal with on line each day.
About Hard Day's Night's comment regarding multiple male orgasms. Most healthy young men are good for two ejaculations over the course of a single night with maybe a nice wake up in the morning. Older men are happy to get one in at night and then maybe after some prolonged foreplay a little one in the morning. More than that it becomes just work, and even with two most men prefer a two or three day hiatus before climbing back in the 'sack'. Then there's the wife, and she'll have her own priorities, and her interests that often won't include intro-mission. (My wife likes me to do her.) When I was younger I found the quality of an ejaculation was much more important than how many. Also I have a wife who couldn't (wouldn't) use birth control pills, and even a wink and smile would get her pregnant so we had to be cautious.
About the clenched walking. It happens with men too. It happens with me. It happens to me a lot.
Had a good laugh over this one. Pheromones? Novel idea!! Thanks for the fun read. But I was hoping you would take this in the direction of if you can't beat them join them. Why couldn't Colleen sneak some pheromones to Irene and have a happy three way till he dies from exhaustion. What a great way to go though. Thanks. 5 stars for the fun read.
In any category. This could leave you with lots of questions about Fate and Morality.
Something along with those who do not believe in date rape drugs or hypnotic suggestion.
Never say you wouldn't cheat, but is drug induced sex the same thing as sex of free will? That is the only interesting thing about this story and it was left unfinished. Sex and love are left as some kind of chemical reaction rather than a choice based on the love and admiration a person feels for another person. The fact that she dosed him with a drug, fucked up his marriage should leave him wondering what kind of fucked up person she is. The rational mind always has it's day, and when it does the truth can be ugly and hard to live with. He can see a shrink for as long as he likes, they aren't miracle workers! It doesn't change the fact that he got involved with a sick selfish bitch and lost a decent woman. The trajectory for his new relationship is a course straight to Hell.
The idea that pheremones and sex alone could kill love and a desire for children? Awful. Sex is important, of course, but to imagine that pheromone-enhanced sex with a stranger could trump a loving relationship (where, it appears, sex was mutually satisfying before) is just . . . Sad. Am I the only one?
I'm with the author on one thing. HDK, you are beginning to make yourself look ridiculous. Lady in Red is bad enough but 3 times a day as a routine! Dream on.
I am a few years away. On average I masterbate twice a day, if not getting sex. On days I have sex I probably can do it like 3 times. The last one is just a dribble. I can manage another in the morning. I eat tons of brocolli, peanuts, bananas,berries, and spinach. I just blitz it into a drink twice a day. I think readily nutrients has to do it too. Plus I eat a lot of rich zinc foods. 200 to 300 push-ups a day, 500 sit-ups, and I am on the treadmill for 40 minutes.
The concept of a pheromone drug which drives a strictly moral person to infidelity is interesting. However, an intelellegent individual with strong beliefs should try to fight it and feel somewhat helpless, when he fails. I am mising this struggle, which could also be used to give deeper insights into the personality of your hero.
Adding that cream was the same as adding the date-rape drug to a woman in a bar. Both were criminal activities. Which makes this tale as improbable as any fiction written.
Why do so many people want to analyze these stories like they were trial transcripts?
The writer invented a pheromone enhancer that turns people into sex addicts, yet is criticized for inventing a 31 year old character who can only get it up once a day.
Ya know? Some times a story is just a fun story.
Keep 'em coming, imhapless. None of us here are Shakespeare, or even Nelson DeMille, but we should be enjoying ourselves more, I think.
Please send me some of that stored pheromone enhancer!
I really enjoyed this story. I'm glad the emphasis was on the pheromone and not on the divorces. Pheromones, except this manufactured one ..manufactured in fantasy, are nonspecific, ie. multidirectional. Anyway, really enjoyed this story. Hope you keep writing.
Aye, the plot's the thing ( but sometimes it's own sting )
Clever to a fault . Good idea - but the characters were puppets. This is why first rate actors like Robert Downey Jr. are hired to inject life into tech/ mech sagas. Without human quirks to hang one's literary hat on, this is going to be a one and done as a read. Pretty good but not enduring. Pulp friction. I enjoyed this, but won't be compelled to revisit it. ****
English
Didn't like it at all
I find stories with magical chemicals to be pointless. You can justify anything, there is no real inter-personal drama.
different, maybe plausible
Wow, I wouldn't know of any solution. Their gene has to be altered in some way , and there is not a thing that can be done. Unless you can genetically reverse engineer the altered gene. Genetics isn't a strong subject for me. If they had any children, would that trait be passed on? 5 for being really different
Wrong category
This is mind control not loving wives
Enjoyed it
A fun read.
Nice!
Thanks for sharing.
Different!
Stupid, but different.
The guy is 31 and never does it twice in a day?
That's one of the hardest things to believe about the story. At 31, three times in a day should be easily accomplished and greatly enjoyed.
Different
I agree with zed0, silly, but very good.
Shame that the cream did not work on Irene to make a 3sum relationship !
Category...
This should be in sci/fic stories...
THE SCENT OF THE FERAL ANIMAL
has arousal for the human mind. TK U MLJ LV NV
Your comments are off
Sorry, HDK, but you're starting to believe your own fantasies about 11 inch cocks and endless male orgasms.
As for the category, how is this different (though more imaginative) than the hundreds of stories in LW where the wife is slipped a date rape drug (appearing in half of JPB's stories)?
Sorry to be a bitchy little girl, but since commentators can say anything they want, so can I.
Cheers, Hap
GREAT Sci-Fi tale
A clear Sci-Fi Fiver! Agree with Impo! Only trouble is that in Sci-Fi, the 'magic cream aphrodisiac' will be even more obvious than it was in LW! Loved it. Thanks to Hapless for designing the 'Breeding Period with Irene' to be in the future!
Clever and enjoyable
So many people complain about LW stories that are boring and devoid of originality, and yet here is a story that is both interesting and original...and people still complain. You truly can't please all the people all the time!
This was a fun story to read, and I have no problem deviating from reality when it's well-written fantasy such as this. The only problem I had with the story line was that Jim and Irene couldn't salvage their marriage, given the extraordinary circumstances of his infidelity. There is a bit of "magical thinking" in the premise that sex with another person can be so incredible that it would compel you to abandon a loving and fulfilling marriage. But again, I'm able to suspend that disbelief and enjoy the story for what it is.
Thanks for sharing it!
P.S. -- If you are 31+ years old and you have never had sex two or more times in a span of a few hours, you clearly haven't been with the right woman!
Interesting albiet strange
I wasn't surprised about the bug bite cream but was surprised at the ending. Entertaining little story.
I hope this is a true story
and we can look forward to getting some of that ointment at our local Wallgreens.
Why would a man walk bow-legged from a lot of sex?
Women yes. Men no. Unless they're doing something odd.
Yes and no and then yes again...
I really had a good time reading this story. That's a great big yes! The thing about the pheromone drug was utter nonsense, and that was a super big no! I'm not into Science Fiction. I don't dislike it; I just don't look for it. But the story was so delightfully and interestingly silly I had to slap a great big five on it. I liked Colleen.
Now you understand 'Hapless' you're not John Steinbeck, but neither am I. This story was just the right length and just the right kind of silliness to provide a terrific break from the usual daily crap I have to deal with on line each day.
About Hard Day's Night's comment regarding multiple male orgasms. Most healthy young men are good for two ejaculations over the course of a single night with maybe a nice wake up in the morning. Older men are happy to get one in at night and then maybe after some prolonged foreplay a little one in the morning. More than that it becomes just work, and even with two most men prefer a two or three day hiatus before climbing back in the 'sack'. Then there's the wife, and she'll have her own priorities, and her interests that often won't include intro-mission. (My wife likes me to do her.) When I was younger I found the quality of an ejaculation was much more important than how many. Also I have a wife who couldn't (wouldn't) use birth control pills, and even a wink and smile would get her pregnant so we had to be cautious.
About the clenched walking. It happens with men too. It happens with me. It happens to me a lot.
Sorry Hapless
I agree with HDK. At 31, 3 or 4 times a day would be effortless. Heck, even at 41 it shouldn't be a big deal.
Fun Read
Had a good laugh over this one. Pheromones? Novel idea!! Thanks for the fun read. But I was hoping you would take this in the direction of if you can't beat them join them. Why couldn't Colleen sneak some pheromones to Irene and have a happy three way till he dies from exhaustion. What a great way to go though. Thanks. 5 stars for the fun read.
Fun Story,
In any category. This could leave you with lots of questions about Fate and Morality.
Something along with those who do not believe in date rape drugs or hypnotic suggestion.
****
Hey, Carvohi! I'm with you man! Just a smile and she was PG. Good story, imhapless. I enjoyed it. Ah, them were the days. LOL! Cheers!
Never?
Never say you wouldn't cheat, but is drug induced sex the same thing as sex of free will? That is the only interesting thing about this story and it was left unfinished. Sex and love are left as some kind of chemical reaction rather than a choice based on the love and admiration a person feels for another person. The fact that she dosed him with a drug, fucked up his marriage should leave him wondering what kind of fucked up person she is. The rational mind always has it's day, and when it does the truth can be ugly and hard to live with. He can see a shrink for as long as he likes, they aren't miracle workers! It doesn't change the fact that he got involved with a sick selfish bitch and lost a decent woman. The trajectory for his new relationship is a course straight to Hell.
Maybe I'm a fuddy duddy, but I found this sad
The idea that pheremones and sex alone could kill love and a desire for children? Awful. Sex is important, of course, but to imagine that pheromone-enhanced sex with a stranger could trump a loving relationship (where, it appears, sex was mutually satisfying before) is just . . . Sad. Am I the only one?
Oh Please.
I'm with the author on one thing. HDK, you are beginning to make yourself look ridiculous. Lady in Red is bad enough but 3 times a day as a routine! Dream on.
3orgasm is possible
I am a few years away. On average I masterbate twice a day, if not getting sex. On days I have sex I probably can do it like 3 times. The last one is just a dribble. I can manage another in the morning. I eat tons of brocolli, peanuts, bananas,berries, and spinach. I just blitz it into a drink twice a day. I think readily nutrients has to do it too. Plus I eat a lot of rich zinc foods. 200 to 300 push-ups a day, 500 sit-ups, and I am on the treadmill for 40 minutes.
Interesting but a little lifeless
The concept of a pheromone drug which drives a strictly moral person to infidelity is interesting. However, an intelellegent individual with strong beliefs should try to fight it and feel somewhat helpless, when he fails. I am mising this struggle, which could also be used to give deeper insights into the personality of your hero.
Damn
Adding that cream was the same as adding the date-rape drug to a woman in a bar. Both were criminal activities. Which makes this tale as improbable as any fiction written.
No rating
Just a fun story
Why do so many people want to analyze these stories like they were trial transcripts?
The writer invented a pheromone enhancer that turns people into sex addicts, yet is criticized for inventing a 31 year old character who can only get it up once a day.
Ya know? Some times a story is just a fun story.
Keep 'em coming, imhapless. None of us here are Shakespeare, or even Nelson DeMille, but we should be enjoying ourselves more, I think.
rj
Please send me some of that stored pheromone enhancer!
I really enjoyed this story. I'm glad the emphasis was on the pheromone and not on the divorces. Pheromones, except this manufactured one ..manufactured in fantasy, are nonspecific, ie. multidirectional. Anyway, really enjoyed this story. Hope you keep writing.
Nice Tale***
Thanks for sharing.
Aye, the plot's the thing ( but sometimes it's own sting )
Clever to a fault . Good idea - but the characters were puppets. This is why first rate actors like Robert Downey Jr. are hired to inject life into tech/ mech sagas. Without human quirks to hang one's literary hat on, this is going to be a one and done as a read. Pretty good but not enduring. Pulp friction. I enjoyed this, but won't be compelled to revisit it. ****
I love this story
You keep writing 'em, I'll keep reading 'em!
:/
I didn't like it. Sex is hard to resist I know but the betrayal sucked. Excellent writing style though!
a solution?
So, why didn't they just use the cream on Irene and live as a happy threesome?
NEVER SAY NEVER-----UH OH
not again!!!! TK U MLJ LV NV
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