So far, I'm liking the series just enough to continue reading each part. Inconsistency and grammatical errors are really what are bugging me and detracting from the overall attention that I pay to the story. For example, the botanist was Sanchez in ch.1 but was referred to as Chavez in ch. 3. For grammatical errors, shorthand abbreviations (such as b/t for "between" and 2 for "to"), and the frequent lack of commas and punctuation where there should be one, cut my attention span dramatically.
Please take English class again.
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