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Supernasty
Sounds like it's time for mommy to lick her daughter clean and get some of that cock action.
Not a bad first story!
You know what you are trying to convey, that is obvious. I might suggest that you use one of the volunteer editors on Literotica to help you flesh out your next story.
Keep writing!
As the others have
I also urge an editor of which there are many.
Not bad for a first try and new member of Lit. Keep on, find an editor and go for the next chapter.
The Eagle ( " ")
see's promise!
2 talons up
Good ideas
A lot of potential. Siblings close in age can help each other out without going all the way. It can benefit both in several ways.
Good
Uhm...how are they unrealistic? I have 16E's. Some people have small breasts, some have large. Get over it.
Damn
That's all I can say about this great story. Can't wait for the next chapter!!
waste of time
i stopped at the ugly 36DDDs, if you are really this big get a reduction before they kill your back and knees.
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