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After Invitation 'n Indecision what will your next be , Saucy MH.....???
Intuition , Insuiniation , Intansgience ??? 5-ed .
connected
I so connected with this....I fought love for a year before finally admitting defeat and just accepting it. The speaker's indecion and fears are evident...as evident t as my own feelings were.. a great way to convey that feat many of us feel to take a risk!
Excellent last four lines
I really, really liked the last four lines. Magnificently capturing the feeling of indecision. They do this with a very plain and matter of fact style and word usage.
The first eight lines are much more ornate and wordy and (in my view) do not work anything like as well.
If it was easy
Would it be worth it? Like the simplicity of style and the confused, indecisive finale. I've made up my mind: 5stars.
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