Some minor grammatical issues like Roberts (penis) and it's used as a possessive (it isn't), regardless though, a story that broke the conventions of complete sentences and did so effectively. I really liked it and hope to read more from you!
Nice flowing story that hit all the right notes. I can relate to the moving feelings of a brothers love and the ultimate giving of oneself . Would have loved to hear the beginning of the relationship and how it evolved. Maybe next story?
A very nice story, I have not read
many with Brother and sister and this
story has a nice flow to it and actually
made me wonder what it would be like
if I could have that kind of intimacy with
my sister. I really enjoyed this story.
Wonderful story about brother sister love. The build up was great, not to fast and not to slow. I hope you write a follow up or continue with other stories. Family love is the best and I enjoy reading about it. Keep up the good work.
"My Rock:" - Kathleen and Robert - (Forty-six Year Old (Married) Sister and Forty-Eight Year Old [Never Married] Brother)
For a beautiful mid-life still-in-her-sexual-prime married wife to her (seldom home) husband of 23 years, seems to have found herself an additional pleasure--auspiciously and pleasingly for her readers--of writing a momentuous story of basic human love! Just as importantly, the ultimate lover's story is the male and female love story of a sister and brother! 'The Rock' is a monumental story with deep convictions of two people's over-whelming love for each other. This story is one of my three top choices for the best written, and thus best reading, story of my life!! Of course, I am partial and biased as my favorite content and subject matter is brother and sister, mother and son, and father and daughter incestual, and exotic love and romance and family.
'Kathleen48' has just hit the ultimate World Series of baseball with a bases-loaded down-three-runs in the bottom of the ninth-inning homerun, and the combined Super Bowl with only one-second left in the game, and a run back a 109 yards kick-off return for the winning touchdown!! Only a very few writer's have her depth and ability with words to form such a magnificent saga, and with epic formulation!
Keep writing Lady! Though this story, the most decent I've ever read, seems to have been garnered from real life experiences, your imaginative assets can easily write fiction of an incestual nature and equal in quality!!
You have a talent, so I'm surprised that you have only the one submission. I know that I would like to read more of your work, so hopefully we haven't heard the last from Kathleen48?.
English
Very sensual story
Loved your well written story and am looking forward to reading more from you.
Good Work
This story is nicely paced, it has good structure, and you (the writer) show an above-average skill as a wordsmith. Please keep up the good work!
Very good short story
Realistic and well written. This type of affair can work very well
Nice story
Some minor grammatical issues like Roberts (penis) and it's used as a possessive (it isn't), regardless though, a story that broke the conventions of complete sentences and did so effectively. I really liked it and hope to read more from you!
Moving and sensual
Nice flowing story that hit all the right notes. I can relate to the moving feelings of a brothers love and the ultimate giving of oneself . Would have loved to hear the beginning of the relationship and how it evolved. Maybe next story?
I sure liked it
A very nice story, I have not read
many with Brother and sister and this
story has a nice flow to it and actually
made me wonder what it would be like
if I could have that kind of intimacy with
my sister. I really enjoyed this story.
Wonderful story!
No need to regret this action or thought; it was a wonderful expression of a beautiful experience. Hopefully you have others stories to tell us.
Very, very good story.
Wonderful story about brother sister love. The build up was great, not to fast and not to slow. I hope you write a follow up or continue with other stories. Family love is the best and I enjoy reading about it. Keep up the good work.
Mary
"My Rock:" - Kathleen and Robert - (Forty-six Year Old (Married) Sister and Forty-Eight Year Old [Never Married] Brother)
For a beautiful mid-life still-in-her-sexual-prime married wife to her (seldom home) husband of 23 years, seems to have found herself an additional pleasure--auspiciously and pleasingly for her readers--of writing a momentuous story of basic human love! Just as importantly, the ultimate lover's story is the male and female love story of a sister and brother! 'The Rock' is a monumental story with deep convictions of two people's over-whelming love for each other. This story is one of my three top choices for the best written, and thus best reading, story of my life!! Of course, I am partial and biased as my favorite content and subject matter is brother and sister, mother and son, and father and daughter incestual, and exotic love and romance and family.
'Kathleen48' has just hit the ultimate World Series of baseball with a bases-loaded down-three-runs in the bottom of the ninth-inning homerun, and the combined Super Bowl with only one-second left in the game, and a run back a 109 yards kick-off return for the winning touchdown!! Only a very few writer's have her depth and ability with words to form such a magnificent saga, and with epic formulation!
Keep writing Lady! Though this story, the most decent I've ever read, seems to have been garnered from real life experiences, your imaginative assets can easily write fiction of an incestual nature and equal in quality!!
Great story.
You have a talent, so I'm surprised that you have only the one submission. I know that I would like to read more of your work, so hopefully we haven't heard the last from Kathleen48?.
nicely done
thank you
Sweet and sexy
Please write more.
Very nice
Great story, I really like it.
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