Where's My Wife?

stupid

too stupid really to comment, but wish I could quote -5* instead of 1.

Where is the Story

Really really really bad.Need to take a shower after that turd

Close enough

In my opinion, this post was aimed mostly at garnering irate criticism rather than any intent of sharing an experience the author considers to be erotic!

1*

Waste of time

This should not even be allowed to be placed on this site. -10

@ 'author' wifelvrman

this was a sick joke, right?

Next story have guys cum on/in you. I'm sure you want it! You're "gay by proxy" )))

My bad. That's the GAY category.)))))))

Sorry

Absolute Crap

Cuckold stories...

I like cuckold stories...But it must always exist respect and love in them...Without respect, like in this one, the story becomes a tragedy, because the marriage ends in that moment...

Q#1....WHO IN THE HELL CARES

Q#2....WHY WOULD/SHOULD I. tk u mlj lv nv

More cuck bullshit from literotica and they are too fucking lazy to make it a category!

Just more cuck trash from the gay literotica authors!!! Dont bother reading 1 star!

Please tell us...

...how can a wimp as you obviously are write stuff like this without throwing up?

she should...

He should have told her to stay where she was and never come home!!!! That he would send her all her things...From then on, her lovers took care of her...This end would have a
4 *....

disgusting tale, poorly written

Deserves a no star. Reads like something out of the old Dragnet show. "Just the facts, mam." Of course, given the lousy subject, that's probably for the best.

Wife's dialogue sounds like someone who has English as their third or fourth language, a primary school student or someone completely stoned. The plot is utter nonsense and would really be better placed in non-consent or fetish. Poorly conceived and poorly written.

WTF

I hate cuckold stories and your just adding to the immense over saturation of them on the Loving Wives genre,
If people are gonna continue to write this dribble then there is obviously people who like this kind of thing can Literotica make the cuckolds and sissy's/wimps there own genre so I can just pass over it without having to read it

not a NICE tale

But that is life!!!

Stopped half way through this trash

voted a 1 couldn't vote 0. Looked at your home page, sorry I read even half.

Sucked in again

Wierd, if it wasnt so short I would never have finished it. I keep waiting for the guy to finally realize the disrespect. Not only a cheating slut but doing stuff with total strangers she never did with him. In a real scenario, he wouldnt have to toss her ass out because she would never get back in. He had all night, She should have come home to a house of door knobs that her keys didnt fit and her shit laying out on the street; throwing her shit on the lawn would have been too good for her. I wouldnt have been home when she got home either, I would have been out emptying and then closing all the bank accounts.

I get it

You only wrote this trash to piss off the LW readership, to see how many of them will 1* bomb your story, you get off on the anger generated.

You must have really wanted to write a non erotic story.

Congrats, you succeeded. I couldn't even read half of it before I scrolled to the bottom just to one bomb you.

Not good

Although I do like the cheating wife / hotwife genre, I'm not a fan of feminization or humiliation stories. Your story really needs character expansion as well as an editor. Your writing is downright bad and I have no desire to read your other "work!"

Stupid . . .

. . . to say the least, stupid and an insult to the readers.

So far not good

Is this just one chapter from a longer story? There has got to be more to make sense of what's going on.

ok who is the sickest, him or her, lets have a poll

my vote him, she is just an adulterous betraying slut, out to die from AIDS, He on the other hand could have dumped her but didn't.

Gotta agree with the others on this.

I'm sorry, but this story seemed flat. If this were a movie, I could practically see the characters blowing their nails and reading a magazine as they went through their lines.

Revenge

This story begs for the husband to get revenge with a capital R. Revenge against her and revenge against the male participants. Sounds like a good PI investigation story and woe heaped on the wife.

end of story

end of marriage

not a BTB tale

more like a KTB story

or at the very least make her wish she was dead

I realize it's fiction

But I don't understand how a woman could do that to her husband. Apparently, prior to this their relationship was normal. Then this comes out of left field, irrespective of their pillow talk, and she is suddenly into degrading and humiliating a man she supposedly loves.
Swapping, swinging, hot wife, that is all usually done with each others' consent, with love, respect, and communication. This is... shit. I couldn't get away fast enough.

sick

What has the world come to?

Bad taste

OK, sorry. The husband is one of those unfortunate individuals with a mental-handy-cap. You should not write terrible stories of individuals with impairments. Bad taste.

Painted toenails

So you're saying she didn't paint her toenails? It was a ruse!

1 star

any man who drinks cum is gay plain and simple.

Why bother?

Why not just save the space you occupy with your so called writing, for someone who truly write stories. If there were a star below #1, I would mark it.

This is fucking disgusting and you need a lobotomy if this is not disgusting to you!

So you picked the worst parts of random stories

And threw them together on this page? This was simply horrible. Since it was only a fantasy on his part, she decided to get gang banged on her own. Why did he do anything she said when she got home? She cheated and made it plain as day that she enjoyed it. SO either spin her around and throw her out or pack and leave her. She has clearly demonstrated she has no love or respect for him. This marriage is over. Why would he expose himself to all the diseases? This whole story made no sense. Horrible even for fiction. As a previous commentator suggested, you seem to have written this just to piss off the readership. If that was the case - mission accomplished. If you thought this was a worthwhile story to share - you failed miserably. Boy would I like to give you a negative 5. You earned it.

Awful

A story like this needed much more background to accept his acceptance.

If the option was...

"or you'll never fuck me again", then THAT is the option to take.

I'm sure he asked her to fuck another man, in the heat of the moment, to fuel some kinky fantasy, HOWEVER....
She didn't fulfill his fantasy, she satisfied HERS.
That she can't tell the difference means that this marriage is over.
Staying will only cause him to endure continual abuse.
End it now!

He deserves some grief for being stupid and weak.

But there is no reason to put up with ANY of it, now that she has shown her true colors.

Cut your losses, before somebody dies. The marriage is ALREADY dead. Mourn your loss, learn from your mistakes, and get out with your asshole intact!

May be the next one will TALK to you BEFORE torpedoing the relationship.
Save your hope for the future. This skank needs to become your past.

Garbage

I read a lot of stories on Lit and you can't write. Give it up! Quit! Stop!

Sorry...

I really like cuckold stories, but this just doesn't make it. No thought, no love, no development. There are some real wives who have become real cuckoldresses, but it NEVER happened like that.

If it's not believable, it's not a turn - on.

Reading the comments

Wow, now that's a lot of negative comments. I think I'll pass on this one. Bye.

My hope in humanity is waning

Not reading anymore low rated Loving wife stories. Fucking hate cuckold based crap, I'm starting to understand the unreasonable btb crowd, who low rates decent stories when the husband takes back a wife who cheats and promises to never do it again. Talk about wimps, ugh.. 1

This was rushed

You rushed writing this so it is only a 3. Take your time cuckold. Don't rush. Stop jerking off as you write. Have some background and build up. And ignore the trolls. Most of them jerked their little peanuts off just like you did. Keep trying and for god sake put some thought into it.

PMSL!!!!!

OH NOOOOEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSS IT'S DEVILSCUCK!!!!!!! stop fantasizing about how your a big bad bull when your wife is fucking other men and feeding you from her diseased cunt!!!! LOLOLOLOLOLOL


DON'T HATE THE JOKESTER! HATE THE JOKES LIKE DEVILSCUCK!!!
This has been a public service of C0untertr0ll Inc.

another story leaving readers wondering...

ignore the anger of those who have to have the whole story laid out in one piece and who have to have it end in the way they want.

you've got me intrigued again... where did this come from, where is it going...

keep them coming... whether it's expanding on a prior piece or a new bit what you imagine is worth reading.

More Loser Bullshit For The Spineless Eunuchs Out There

Those wimps that like this need to just switch teams and become gay or literally become eunuchs. And women marry these idiots for that "open marriage" thing, great.

Insecure

If you don't like stories of cheating wives, don't read loving wives you morons. I don't read a number of genres because they don't appeal. You guys sound as if your wife has been unfaithful of you may get your kicks from the man on man sections. Fuck off.

spineless

your wife is a cunt and you are the most beta person in this world...enjoy being a loser the rest of your life

what shite

when she told him to clean her up or he would never fuck her again his response should have been you are right you whore.by my choice i would never want to fuck you again after you fucked 5 other men.when she goes for her next fuckfest he should change the locks and throw all her stuff out onto the front garden.he should then have her served with divorce papers at the school assembly in front of all the pupils and teachers.5A

awesome

loved it