Born Into Darkness Ch. 02

interesting

I have read your first chapter and this one I am a little curious to how it will play out and im hoping this isn't going to be another short lived paranormal romance like a lot of the others that involve things that go bump in the night. good plot and I look forward to reading more of your work.

plz flesh out the characters more

Need more on who these characters are. Keep going plz

Extremely good first chapters. Now for the neverending cry of all readers.....longer chapters.

Awwww

And chapter three is longer i promise!!! im on eight pages right now. It's a litle hard balancing work and writing but reading all your comments warms my heart that you all what to read more. I love you guys
-Angel Out

NICE

Please keep up the work this story has a very good start, but please do all us readers a favour, please carry on writing and don't let this become one of the many unfinished stories on here!!!

Standards will rise

I really like where this story's plot is going so far, and I'm really excited that you're going to get an editor soon. I hope next chapter will help with the development of your characters, though, so I'm going to be having higher standards as you release more chapters, but, for now, it gets five stars. Good luck with your writing and finding an editor!

~Dimidiae