Emily Pt. 01

Oh yes...I can see this going in so many directions.
When will we see part 2?
I liked it...a lot.

More!!!

Please write more to this story. Its going in the right direction so far.
Would love Mustafa's friends to get more involved as well.

looking good

This is looking really really good. Can we have a bit more of a description of what she's wearing to work.
Maybe a tease for us before she gets in there.

But great writing, and great premise.

Asian with a Pakistani accent.... riiiight.

Previous poster...

Exactly where do you think Pakistan is? Africa? The South Seas?

Exactly how dumb are some people?

Pakistan is part of Asia, therefore, Pakistanis are Asians. For the love of god, pick up an atlas before you comment. There should be an IQ test before people are allowed on the internet.

Wow

Okay, I'm not a grammarian or an editor, so I'll not nitpick over minor details.. I'd like to say that I've lurked here for years and the Emily series is one of the handful of stories on this website that I read over and over again!