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Jen Calls the Shots

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/20/14

Stupidity runs amok

Was she a huge woman and was he a small man? If not and you didn't make it clear, he throws her off, no problem. So she didn't "force" him to do anything. And there is absolutely no guarantee that she'll become pregnant anyway. So this whole "I'll force you to cum in me" scenario is complete and utter bollocks. Idiotic story. No stars.

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by Tommybowler07/20/14

positive

I really liked the story and the idea behind it. The thing I would change is not writing it in present tense, that spoiled the flow, she impaled herself on his throbbing member and worked it deep into her moist furtile opening, she rode him hard like a woman possessed determined to fill herself with his reluctant seed. That kind of thing.

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by Pleasure_Lover07/21/14

Anons Run Amok

Don't mind the anonymous user below. He's just one of those trolls too cowardly to post as themselves. Wonder what people have against femdom (even light forms such as this) nowadays.

Anyway, great story!

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by anubelore02/05/15

really, Pleasure_Lover? really? You're so brave, in comparison, then?

Because a pseudonymous online handle is so much less "anonymous" than simply posting without an account, right? But then, someone who advocates, or at least defends, spousal rape would know more about courage than I, clearly! Oops! It's not spousal rape...it's "nonconsensual femdom"...and because "men can't be raped" it's A-okay! My most sincere apologies. #sarcasm. I could detail all the reasons your "he's a man, hence he is strong, hence he could've thrown her off, hence I'M RIGHT AND YOU SUCK!" hypothesis is not only scientifically invalid, but utterly ludicrous and completely lacking in an understanding of even basic human biology, not to mention elementary level physics...but that would be more effort than I am willing to expend upon such a person, and in such a forum. Rape is not femdom. Forced impregnation is rape. And a man need not be tied down or incapacitated by drugs to be raped by a smaller woman (or smaller man). The courts, rare though their courage in such matters shamefully is, have adamantly established that fact.
Good day. -Anubelore

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