A Wives Tale

To be truthfull

I was pretty sure I was going to read a little and blow the rest off. This turned out to be a really sweet story. Good job!

Such A Sweet Story...

...Just a bit fantastic, but incredibly romantic and erotic. So much love between these two, and its shown thru various means and effects. You write well and I can't wait for more adventures with these two. Thanks for sharing these Exs with us, and please keep writing, this was WONDERFUL! Cheers! --- Josie

Jeus christ

I knew the moment I read the word 'cisplain' that this was going to suck

Hey Anon Asshole

The only thing that sucks around here is you. This was their first story. Lets see you have the courage to submit one of your own. And while you are at it, learn how to spell for Christ's sake.

Gotta admit cisplain is a stupid term. The story however was far from stupid. It was nicely paced with solid characters. thank you for this brief tale

Very Sweer

Great Story

more chapters

Thiis is a good start

I like what you have written. Please keep the story going I would like to read more.

I'll admit cringing a touch at "cisplain" but only because I'm fairly certain I've heard it else where and it's as "venomous" as... what's the exact formulation again, "mansplain"? I think people tend to say such things because it's not socially acceptable to say "I wish to exact slow and painful revenge with the tip of a blade until you beg for forgiveness for your discriminatory stone age stereotyped ways"... Actually it may also be for brevity, now I think about it. And a touch less violent. And not so threatening.

But my version still has the point.

Sorry, that pun was terrible and uncalled for. Oh, that's all puns, mastermind.
Ok, on topic... Hmmm. I signed up to comment on this and Lockerroom, is that sufficient compliment? I kid, of course it isn't, but I'm a little stuck since I'd be repeating what I wanted to say on your other story... Bittersweet and beautiful in slightly sad but romantic way. I need to go read part 2 now.