What A Man Needs?

A dream come true

I loved it. Its like a dream come true for me. I pictured myself as "honey". And then I blew my load of course.

Thank You

I live in Cincinnati - Where is this store?

Thank you for a great story

Hot as hell!!!!

I loved this submission. I hope to find more like it.

It's like a dream

I so thoroughly enjoyed this story on EVERY level, and it was SO well written. I look forward to reading more of your work.

CRAZY

I could not believe that you had me in this story. I feld part of it. No story has done this to me.
Thanks

Fun Eroticism

I loved that story. It was fun and very erotic. Had me very excited if you know what I mean. These characters should be in another story. I particularly liked how Jessie scolded Ronnie about calling Honey a bitch in that tone. It really made it more an enjoyable encounter of exploration rather than a submissive thing. Not that submissiveness is bad in a story, but for my tastes, I generally do like it as part of the TG fiction I enjoy unless it consented to earlier in the story. Just me. Anyway, loved it. Keep enjoying your writing.

loved it

i loved the coy way it played out and loved the way he gave in to what we all have felt, that wonderful feeling of having a cock in our mouth.

Very hot

I've been fascinated by transexuals for the last couple of years. This story really turned me on. I like reading about guys going down on T-girls but I love it when the T-girl fucks him in the ass... especially for the first time!

good stuff

i really enjoyed this story maybe a return trip is in order?

You have excelled

You really have excelled yourself with this story. I loved it. You are a very gifted writer.

Beautiful!!

Now I know exactly how I want to lose my anal virginity!

GREATNESS!

This story was really hot and sweet!! Loved the gentleness of the girls and the shemale factor!!!! Wish to hear more about "the family"!

fantastic

this story was fantastic i am 18 and have a vergina arse i would so love my cherry to be poped like that i want it so bad i just can not wait till someone pops mine

good story

Very good, but there's a lot of grammer mistakes and what looks like pieces missing from the story which drops my rating down from 4/5 to 3/5. Good work though!

great

Really good story, remind's me of my first time
with a Ladyboy in Thailand!

Wonderful

If perhaps, from my experience, a bit unlikely to actually happen, but I've often wanted to have similar unlikely fantasiers happen to me. It's.... difficult being a girl with outdoor plumbing. Until I met my wife, the only people who ever wanted me only wanted what I have, not who I was. It's weird to have the self-esteem of a wet rock and still know you're a sex object solely because of an accident of birth. This story, I could put myself in Jessie's place to a point, although I would've personally destroyed the tape if I had been in Honey's place.

Luv those girly guys

Terrific fantasy, well-written and with plenty of raunchy language. I am a transvestite rather than a shemale or transgender, so I guess I would have enjoyed more detailed descriptions of what the girls were wearing while everyone was "doing it", but that is a small detail. I was a little disappointed though that nobody sucked that poor guy's cock. That wouldn't have happened if I had been present. Good job, Brookell.

jeggza

very smooth story with great character personalities. nice touch of mystery. really enjoyable to read

fulfill me, fill me full

OMG, I wish I was him! I am so turned on by the idea of a "shemale" or transgender to make love with. And Jessie was so sweet and lead him so gently and honestly into his fulfillment!

Excellent story

Really great story. I loved the build up, the excitement and nervousness as he explored an incredibly erotic moment. I've had a similar encounter and it reminded me of the moment of pure joy as I took her hard cock in my mouth. Really well written.

WOW

I loved the way this story was put together. It got me really hot.

~ Naughtly Sara

omg

this story made me wish I was him. I keep cumming back, and cumming, and cumming. *sigh*

Wow

This story had me dreaming about it, you were fantastic ! =)

SEQUEL!

WE WANT A SEQUEL!

Wow.

So hot. A sequel is definitely needed.
Great story, Great pace and fantastic climax.

Xx

Dick Lover

Great story...I would love to meet Jess. I would love to read a sequel.

incredible

your story was one of the hottest i have ever read. when i was done reading it , i noticed that i was leaking alot. very well done, and very welll written too.

Excellent story!

I think this is a very well written story,especially the seduction of him by Jessie.

Great Story!

Very well written! I loved it and I don't say that about many stories. You do a great job of spinning a tale.

This definitely is a well-written story, not plagued by some of the errors others here have committed. I loved how *I* felt while reading--that purpose was achieved--and I wouldn't mind trading places with 'Honey' in a similar fantasy. Thanks!

Mixed Feelings

I don't normally like stories involving shemales since there's so much more to being a woman than lipstick, a wig and lingerie, and from what I've observed on the Net a shemale or tgirl who doesn't look like a skanky black hooker, an underage Thai boy or John Holmes/Ron Jeremy in drag is as rare as hens teeth. Still, this was a fantasy story and I suppose if he was a recent widower, grief and loneliness could explain his foolish voluntary plunge into an incredibly unsafe sexcapade. (risking STD's, robbery, slavery, yada yada yada)
Since enough clues were telegraphed, it came as no surprise that he was being lured into a show for the bachelorette party. However, I was pleasantly surprised the author didn't steer the story down the typical dark path to blackmail, bdsm and humiliation had someone in the bachelorette room recognized him, or had Jess and the tag team proved to be crooked rather than just bent. My mixed feelings about the sappy happy ending (tears and "family") are outvoted by the many positive comments, so kudos to Brooknell. Keep on writing.

Absolutely Brilliant

Superb story, guessed the TS but not the rest, thank you.

I can't wait ....

Few writers can take your breath away like this creative adventure did / does for me. Your words flow with such deep feelings and emotions that made this reader WANT to read more, to visualize through your mind how two searching souls find each other and new horizons. The story overpowered any minor missing or misspelled words ...that added an aire of unexpected humor. I love this creation.

Well done story

Damn... wish my trips to adult bookstores were even half this exciting! Great story, with a little editing (typos), I think this deserves to be printed!

What we all need!

I just love it when I realize that the story I'm involved with is one I've read before, yet I still finish it! I have to say this is probably my overall *favorite* story of the hundreds I've read on this site. Bravo!

a dream

I would like a nice girl like Jessie

kindness makes sex the best

I love stories where gentleness is as hot as the physical component. It makes one feel secure while enjoying a well crafted sexual adventure.
Please write more and edit after the passion of the words rest on the page, Thank You.

Oh HELL NO!

Give me the tape and get the hell away from me you pervert.

Very nice

I could really read more of this fantasy.

Mmm, This Was Hot...

...And would love to read more of these little ladies and their 'daddy'. Thanks for sharing your fantasy, and I'd truly love to read more, please keep writing!

Daddy type

I first saw my first SheMale video at a book store over thirty years ago.
It hAs always been my fantasy to meet someone like jess to take me over the edge. I want her to take my virgin man pussy and and make me swallow her cum.
I would be hers forever!

Home.

Gentleness and kindness are to me the best aphrodisiac. It encourages exploration and allows for the unrestrained discovery and expression of feelings. The ultimate environ to enjoy life. This story sets the stage and thus is a joy to experience. I look forward to more.
The typos disturb the mental movie and disturbs the farce,sic.

good one needs to be continued

hot

The one thing I wasn't comfortable with was when they referred to his ass as a pussy. To me, the only time a man's ass should be referred to as a pussy is if he is a sissy. This man, and gay men are still men. To call their ass a pussy is to minimize their lives, their existence, as gays. To feminize them.

Wow....

That was so friggin sweet! The sex was almost secondary to the raw and honest emotion that was contained thruout the story. Very well written about a subject most "straight" guys don't always think about often. Sure has me thinking a whole lot more now! ;) Beautiful!!

Nicely done!

This is a hot, and sexy story. Even more than that, it is something of a romantic story. There are definite qualities of respect from both Jessie and Honey. For me, it was the trust and honesty that made the sexy exploration so much more than what it could have been. Very well done.
I hope you write more stories. Thanks.

Thank You

For this story. Sexy and sex-positive. Well written. Characters who aren't props, or assholes, or excuses. Excellent work!

Thank you!

Beautifully written...

Take the tape

Go straight to the Police. See to it that they spend a lot of time in jail. Sue and collect retirement money. Family doesn't abuse family. What a load of manure. Disgusting story of abuse and humiliation.

What a load of crap

I don't even know where to begin to tell you how bad this was. Just awful.