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Consequences
Fixing this mess shouldn't be easy...if you do a follow-up then please endeavor to make it a challenge to restore the marriage relationship that she damaged with her infidelity.....and if you really want to make it better let them work together to get some revenge on the guys....it is one thing for a couple to choose an open marriage, quite another for one spouse to "cheat" on their own without regards to consequences. She does appear to love Jimmy so perhaps there is a chance for "fixing" what was broken....just please not another wimp cuckold story.....enough of those on this site now.
Awkward
Generally not a fan of interchanging PoV story-telling. At least this one was (kinda) clearly demarcated between Hubby and Sweetie. However, there were times the 'omniscient observer' was ALSO used. Although not really confusing, it WAS disrupting.
Too many cases of perfect seduction-planning matching up with rapid Sweetie tolerance-level relaxation. Make the seducers work harder to 'count coups (or cooze)'! I DID like that Hal was NOT cast in a Brad Pitt body ... self-assurance is a great aphrodisiac. Also, Bull1 having a horse-cock is trite! Especially if there is a second one 'coming up' (hehe) in a few minutes!
Many readers are more titillated by success in the stages of seduction than by the porking! (Remembering that seduction CAN continue to be conducted even after the sex becomes established!)
Blimey Schwamy
not even my nan is this filthy. Remind me again what is 'nan' short for? 3*
Still loving it
Though not as great as the first, I am pleased with this new chapter. It felt a bit more rushed and I thought the story felt less "shared" than the first, it was still hot! I was hoping for more detail in Nan's POV and maybe the following story might have her husband's POV I am hoping for further seduction/humiliation sex for this exciting couple! At least for me, sharing is hotter! Thank you and write on!
Agree With m48gunner
I agree with m48gunner as there are alot of cuck stories on this site.
Perhaps husband can get crack at the other woman at the party.
The wife could set him as part of guilt for what she has done !
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