All Comments on 'A Revealing Summer Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Amazing

So hot! I've been waiting for a new chapter of this for the longest time so post another soon please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Excellent!

I was so excited to see the next chapter in this story and it did NOT disappoint!! Truly Awesome stuff. Please don't make us wait for the next one, this is such a great story!

zraxepzraxepover 9 years ago

long awaited continuation of the series, youve gotta be one of the top authors here on the site. 5 stars, keep it coming! (hopefully faster please)

9pool9poolover 9 years ago
Missing that something...

The previous chapters had a teasing naughtiness that this one lacked. Too much desperation, not enough playfulness.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Top notch

Well written as usual. Naughty sexy and funny.

Thank you and please the chapters comming and your fantasy flowing.

puzprad111puzprad111over 9 years ago
Fantastic

I've been loving this series, please, please, PLEASE continue it!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Awesome!

Awesome series! Waiting to read more, please get the next chapter out asap, can't wait.

puzprad111puzprad111over 9 years ago
Still amazing!

I've reread this series over and over again. I still love it every single time. This is awesome, please don't stop!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
more

more

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Continue please

This is one of my favorites stories please add another chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Please hurry with the next chapter its so good.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
NEW YEAR'S RESOLUTION

I hope your's is to add a few more chapters. This story is too good to stop now!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
stupid girls

i hope you add alot of IQ to the girls if you add chapters. They are so dumb that its not entertaining anymore

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Seriously, where is more?

We need more.

puzprad111puzprad111about 9 years ago
Still Here

Still hoping for the next chapter, I'll keep waiting as long as it takes!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

any chance chapter 8 coming out soon?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Still waiting for chapter 8 , when will it be ?

puzprad111puzprad111almost 9 years ago
Still hoping!

Haven't given up yet!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Still waiting

You should keep it going.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
IT'S TIME!!!!

FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Definitely one of the best stories I have ever read here ...

... and I really hope we will see the Ch.8, Excellent work.

skyicewolfskyicewolfover 7 years ago
Fucking amazing

PLEASE DO MORE

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Odd

It's been my experience that most men/boys are not actual assholes as the ones portrayed here. But, then, hey, what do I know, I love and respect women.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Assholes

With the exception of the brother and the dad, all the "supposed Males" seem to be related to and adherents of the lifestyle of the 2016 Presidential Idiot-Elect.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
What happens next?!?!?!?!

This series is my favorite! Please write more! It's so sad when great stories like these end on a cliff hanger

LupusDeiLupusDeiover 6 years ago
@Assholes

Yeh, those guys are terrible, I have hard time believing that sort of behaviour can actually exist out in the wild. I can suppress my disbelief for the story purposes, but I think there might also be prototypes out somewhere. If anything of that would have happened where I live, those guys could easily be found in the morning behind the trashcans in a pudle of they own blood, barely alive. Don't get me wrong, I know quite few very hot and nice girls that wouldn't need any help to get that done, and wouldn't hesitate either. And yes, that's what friends are for for those who can't. And, if those idiots would be so stupid as to rant to the police, officers will just beat them for another time, if not even harder.

By the way, running naked is legal here, but nobody does anyway. Well, it most often is too cold for that for most, frankly. Although, there are few guys who prefer to cycle in just tiny shorts all year long, even down to -20. Swimming in the ice hole is a surprisingly popular pastime though.

WallkohfWallkohfabout 6 years ago

it's been years and I'm afraid were gonna have to accept were never going to get another great chapter :(

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

When I first found literotica I, this quickly became one of my favourite series to read. Even now, though it has been years since the last update I still re-read it every once in a while, hoping against all reason that one day a new chapter migbt appear ;)

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