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Too short!
This story contains my favourite fetish!!
It was a good story but far too short and didn't go into detail about how the dad thinks about his daughter, if she had fantasies about her daddy but it was a lovely story! Keep writing more chapters!!
Imagination
Hi Pantera66,
I love your story because it leaves all the Details to my Imagination. Thx a lot you do a nice writing
HOT!!
Oh, too short! Please keep writing more. This was hot and well-written. Mmmmmm
Very hot!
I hope this is the first of many chapters. A great first teasing beginning of things to cum... =)
So Hot
Great job as far as u went but u need to write more & can't wait to hear that daddy did a great job making love to u with his 9 inch cock.Witch is a lot bigger then your hubby's 6 inch one & u can't get enough of it & every chance u get u want it again & again & again.
Thanks, guys!!
FIRST of all, I want to thank you al for your feedback here and via private messages - I am honored and tickled pink that you have enjoyed it as much as you have.
Second: Yes, there is definitely more cumming, but sorry, I will post NO spoilers - you'll have to come back and find out for yourselves what cums next!! hahaha
Third: I feel I have, through my own lack of experience, painted myself into a corner of sorts by choosing to write this in the first person. As a result, most of what comes next will be about what "I'M" thinking/sensing, what Daddy's thoughts and feelings are will not be as fleshed-out as you all might like. It's a learning experience for me, so please bear with me, hopefully I will improve! :)
A great start to something very sensual and passionate we hope.
This is barely a single chapter so it's merely a promise of what's to come hopefully. As long as you keep it real when you continue, I will follow along. If her daddy starts pimping her out to his buddies at the golf club or some such nonsense, I'll be gone.
Fear not!
To "anonymous," believe me, if there is one thing that revolts me about these incest stories it's when the men "pimp out" their daughters/subs as if they were common whores. Nope, that's most assuredly NOT going to happen! As to "keeping it real," well... let's just say I think I will surprise some of my readers! ;) Thanks for the feedback! :)
more please
is just getting rolling. So well written I could easily picture the events. Hot and smutty, but so short.
Well she's telling the story after the fact and seems pretty happy about it now... Heh... But no means fucking no and pinching her after she said no might as well have been bitch slapping her. Dominating her from an authoritative position is still forcing her. Now that I've bitched about it lemme go read the next chapter, heh.
OH PLEASE, FOR HEAVEN'S SAKE, MORE, MORE, MORE, MORE!!! I CAN'T GET ENOUGH OF THIS STORY. THE DESCRIPTIONS ARE FANTASTIC!!!!!
Thanks! :)
Thanks, @wildorn69, I'm glad you're enjoying it - hopefully you have found the other chapters, too? :)
Perfect
Sweet & lovely... Thank you.
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